sentences practise

1. I borrowed some money to tide over until my paid day.
2. I desperately want to know my onions.*
3. My mom would have screamed with full delight when I left home. She wanted to be alone occupying home.
4. A lack of affection notmally comes from a lack of love.
5. When do you think is the best day for meeting ?

Corrections:

Practice Sentences

1. I borrowed some money to tide over until payday. (The day in which payment is recieved is usually called payday.)

2. I desperately want to know my onions. (Is this an expression? If it's not then you shouldn't personify or give human atributes to an object.)

3. My mom screamed with delight when I left home. She wanted to be by herself. 

4. A lack of affection notmally comes from a lack of love.
5. When do you think is the best day for meeting ?

Keep up the good work :)

-Abril

やばくね？

The finals are coming up like a mantis that creeps up on my stomach. In the end, it beheads me.
Just joking, but it is serious. I took five classes this semester, which are analog photography, graphic design, English(requisite), psychology, and a freshman year subject. The last one is so painful. Why do I have to learn about being successful at 21 years old? Well, I should stop complaining, there's no point anyway.

By the way, how's it going everybody?

Note: Well done, your english is easily undertood. I just made some minor corrections that help the paragraph sound better over all. :)