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Hi I'm Jesse, from Australia. I'm a high school student and am studying Japanese, I would like to develop my conversational skills more. Thank you :)
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    Hip-hop songs can help metal illness

    I read an article about how hip-hop can help people to recover from the mental illnesses.
    I didn't have no any idea, why Hip-hop? (Sounds more natural: I don't have any idea, why hip-hop?) I like any kinds of (choose between: all kinds of or any kind of) music except country music but hip-hop tends to contain unspoken words about sex , violence and drugs.
    Cambridge University has a hip-hop therapy. (more natural: Cambridge University has a hip-hop therapy program.) They believe that the lyrics of hip-hop can reach out to people who have emotional problems. The lyrics seems to be representative for the people who have been getting through a tough situation. (more natural: The lyrics seem to be relatable for people who have been going through a tough situation.) It speaks (more natural: It says )where people wants to be, what people wants or wants to do. A while ago I wrote that the contents of hip-hop are negative things but not only that, it speaks of overcoming hardships and big difficulties also, it also has hopes in it.
    I don't think all of the hip-hop can be used for the therapy but I totally agree with the article.
    Music is powerful, especially it's lyrics. People can sympathize with it and see hopes in their lives.

     

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    April 24, 2015
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    Self-introduction

    はじめまして。私はジェシーです。15歳です。南オーストラリアに住んでいます。今高校の2年です。学校で3年ぐらいの日本語をべんきょうしています。でも、少し日本語が分かります。たぶん漢字の100字を書くことができますけど漢字の150字くらいを読むことができます。漢字はむずかしいですね。がんばります。
    ありがとうございます。
    Please correct any mistakes! (日本語では分かりません。)

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    April 24, 2015
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    Self-introduction はじめまして。私はジェシーで、15歳です。南オーストラリアに住んでいます。今高校の2年です。学校で3年ぐらいの日本語をべんきょうしています。でも少し日本語を分かります。たぶん100漢字を書くことができますけどたぶん150漢字を読むことができます。漢字はむずかしいですね。がんばっています。 ありがとうございます。 Please correct any mistakes! (日本語でしりません。)
    April 23, 2015
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