Because "been" means that you went to Germany and came back, while "gone" means that you went to Germany and are still there now.

My hobbies

Hello everyone,Ttoday is June 8st th 2015 and today the weather in Shenzhen is too hot, i I cannot tolerant tolerate that, .Today i I want to talk about my some hobbies.
In general, all my hobbies can be described as a word "sport".I love a lot of outdoor activities: running,basketball,football and so on. I always do sports every morning and afternoon so I look am healthy. 
Thank you

 

Well done! Remember that the pronoun I is always written in capital letter in English.

Hi! It is used for giving advice, similar to "should".

Hello!

I'm from Brazil,this is my first text.
Sorry if it is not perfect...

 

It's very good! You are from plus name of country (Brazil) and you are plus nationality (Brazilian). 

 

I'm from Argentina.

I'm Argentinian.

:)

 

Could you correct mistakes? Thank you a lot

1. I’ll wait at home until you call.
2. When we were at London, we had visited the Tower.
3. I’ ll retell him this message as soon as he calls.
4. I didn’t play haven´t played football since I was 15.
5. After I’ve 'd finished my work, I went home.
6. They’ve closed the gates before I could (entered) go through them.
7. I called to the shop as soon as I’ve 'd checked the contents of the box.
8. After I read the book, you can take it.
9. Tom was reading a book while I was watching TV.
10. What are you going to do while you are waiting wait for them? (or while you wait for them is more common)

 

Good try! Remember that the past perfect is "a past in the past" always used with a past time reference. The present perfect, however, is always related to the present. 

sentence practise

1. I had never been abroad before I was 25.

2. I met my best friend in HK in 2013. I had last seen her 2 years before.

3. I have been to HK, which has very awsome night views late at night. When I got there 1 year ago.,it had been raining a little bit.

4. I like to linger over a cup of coffe at the very quiet coffee shop.

5. I need to do some excercise. Lately, I feel I am getting lazier and lazier.

 

Well done! I don´t understand sentence number 2. If you say "I had last seen her 2 years before" that means that you saw her two years before you met her, which is impossible. What did you mean?

About my job

I am working at an American company as a HR-Human resource. I graduated from college over 6 years ago. I am responsible for administration,the canteen, security securaty, the dormitories, cars,recruiting new employees, orientation, training, etc.
There are 25 persons, including 14 security securaty guards, 5 drivers, 1 dormitory keeper and 5 cleaners. Our canteen is outsourcing the service.There are two drivers whose birthdays are will birthday this Sunday. And our department guys are planning to celebrate it on at Sunday evening.

 

Well done! :)

Español 5/09/2015

Tengo una gran bolsa.
¿que qué será?
Dentro de la casa bolsa está hay un una barra de oro.
Puedo usar la barra de oro para comprar una gallina de oro.
Una gallina de oro puede ponen poner un huevo.
(I have a big bag.
What is it?
Inside the bag is a gold bar.
I can use the gold bar to buy a golden hen.
A golden hen can lay egg.)

(can/ able to)
Yo – puedo
Tú - puedes
él/ella - puede

gallina – hen (f)

Las gallinas ponen un huevo al día -.Hens lay one egg a day.

Lay egg
Yo – pongo
Tú - pones
él/ella - pone