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Hi, my name is Kaysi! I took French during high school and college, but never practiced enough to become proficient. I would really like to become a better speaker, and to be able to hold a conversation in French and watch documentaries etc. but I'm also not sure how much time I have to dedicate to this project.
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    I love diving

    I have always love(d) nature and animals(,) and when I was 15 my parents decided to give me a special present for my birthday: a diving grade (class?). In the first class(,) I was a little scared but when I dove I totally fell in love with this sport. Since then(,) I have been practicing as much as I have could. E - every summer holiday.
    Four years ago(,) my mother decided not to come with me to dive. I didn´t want to go alone(,) and I didn´t know somebody who wanted to try diving(,) so I look(ed) for a diving club to meet new divers and travel to new diving places.
    I meet a lot of people, some of them are now my diving partners and also very good friends. They travel aroud the world to exotic places (such) as México, Egypt, South Africa, Australia... I can´t go with them as much as I´d like(,) but I´m trying to save money for their next adventure.
    Meanwhile(,) I´m content to go to Spanish Mediterranean sea. I use(d) to dive in Murcia, Almería or Alicante. They aren´s so exotics destinations as the other ones but maybe in some years I can have enough money to make my dream come true.

     

    Great job! Very few corrections and everything was very readable. You make diving sound like a really fun time!

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    April 21, 2015
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    Write a comment about your opinion of technology

    I really think that one of the most important events in the history has been the (development of technology) technology development in (over or during) the last (several or few etc.) centuries.
    Thanks to this development(,) we have a better quality of life in many respects every days.
    For example, if we want to travel from one place to another quickly(,) it is possible in these days thanks to airplanes, trains, cars or bus(es)(.) (B)efore this, we have needed a horse or even goes to walking.
    Other important aspect of the technology development in technology (are what) it has produced in the health field(.) (For example,) due the development of new drugs(,) life expectancy has increased.
    This (These) is (are) only two examples about (of) the important (importance) of technologies in our lifes (lives)(.) (F)or this (these reasons)(,) I think that we should give more importance to the advancement of technology.

     

    Overall great job! It was very readable and got your message across. :)

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    April 21, 2015
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    I like learning Engish

    I like learning English, because I think English is (an) international language(.) I can speak English with America(s) ,Turks(,) or Korean(s) (b)y using English to know their culture or share (stories) with them(.) (I)t is very interesting(.) I want to travel all over the world and make friends with (people from different countries)(.) It is my wish! So(,) I will (try) my best to learn (-no my) spoken English(.)~~

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    April 21, 2015
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