4/25/2015

“Tu-tu-tu-tututu”, the alarm clock blared an irritating buzz through its tiny top speaker. Lying on my comfy and cozy bed, I was unwillingly to open my eyes. I fumbled on around my bed stand, searching for the snooze button. I hit the snooze button and drifted off very soon. Half an hour later, I woke up with a start and realized that I was going to be late for work. I bound out of the bed, stormed into the bathroom, took a quick shower, and rushed out from of my home.

!! Use "an" if the next word begins with a vowel and "a" if the next word begins with a consonant" (there are a few exceptions)

!! Only use unwillingly if the sentence is "I unwillingly opened my eyes" since it's an adverb of manner (it tells us how something happened) and unwilling is an adjective (in this case, describing how you were: unwilling)

!! I personally prefer "rushed out of home" or "rushed out of my house" but i guess it's a matter of what you think sounds better

I haven't read any other of your entries but this was really good so congratulations! Tell me if you need more help :)