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- 日本の最初の出会い 私は四歳の時、初めて日本に行きました。そして、初めて日本人の佐藤伯父さんと会いました。佐藤伯父さんは父の友達ので、私の家族は日本に行って佐藤伯父さんを訪ねました。初めて会う時、佐藤伯父さんは七十歳でしたがとても元気人でした。もっとお祖父さんのようにいました。私はよく泣いていましたので、佐藤伯父さんが私にキャンディをくれました。優しい人ですね。日本に着いた時、佐藤伯父さんは家族を迎えに来ました。それに、車で空港からホテルまで送ってくれました。この親切な行為から、私は「ああ、日本人は親切な人ですね。」と思っていました。 日本でした事をあまり覚えていないですが、一番おもしろかった一瞬間を覚えています。家族とさとう伯父さんと一緒にディズニーランドに行って、楽しい時を過ごしました。佐藤伯父さんはあまり若くなくて、私と弟たちも若すぎて、ローラーコースターに乗れていないでした。でも夜の時、すばらしいパレードがありました。もちろん、ディズニーランドに人がいっぱいでした。子供も大人もお年寄りもパレードを見ました。 その日、天気はとても寒かったから、佐藤伯父さんが私にスカーフをくれて、頭をスカーフで包みました。そのスカーフはすべすべして、とても温かかったです。 突然、明かりが消えました。明るいフロートが一つずつ出て来ました。私の背が短いので、フロートを見えていないでした。それから、父は私を肩に担いて、佐藤伯父さんも私の手をつかみました。そこでパレードを全部見えました。フロートは、明るいし、ピカピカだし、それにとてもきれいので、見ている人を魅了しました。明るいフロートのように、みなさんは明るい笑顔を見せました。佐藤伯父さんもうれしかったです。しばらくして、花火をどかんと打ち上げました。空は花火で光り輝きました。それ眺めはとても幻想的でした。その日、日本の最初の出会いに、私は日本が好きになりました。 日本に行くたびに、日本をもっと恋するようになりました。日本の物が大好きです。日本のたくさんきれいな景観、日本のおいしい食べ物、全部が好きです。檜木の軽い香りも大好きです。でも、一番好き物は日本の人です。私は佐藤伯父さんに会うたびに、何か新しい物を学びます。佐藤伯父さんからマナーや日本文化や料理や日本語の学ぶ事が多いです。今、大学で日本語を勉強しています。家でもよく日本のお茶を飲んだり、日本料理を作ったり、日本語を練習しています。大学を卒業した後で、日本に行きたいです。そして、そこで仕事をしたいです。いずれ日本に身を固めるといいです。May 29, 201522
It is the night time in Japan now.
The timezone in Japan is different from the other countries.
For example, right now it is the late morning in London, while it is the night period in Japan.
When exchanging messages with people from other timezones, the presence of the time difference can really be felt.
It is a wonder to be in the same world.
Correct my English Please.そうですね。オーストラリアは日本より一時間も早いです。だから、オーストラリアにも夜です。
0 votedMay 1, 20151If you're already done with learning the basic hiragana, katakana and kanji, and want to focus on reading and expanding your knowledge of kanji, I recommend getting a japanese literature book. Just one book, a student one would be better for beginners. Focus on that one book, and try to understand phrase by phrase while going back and forth with a dictionary. This helps to open your mind up to a whole new world of kanji and with just one book, you'll be able to learn a lot. Finding the book, however can be hard. If you have Kinokuniya in your country, they would sell a lot of japanese books, especially some suited for learners. I recommend getting the "Read Real Japanese" series that have write-ups and short stories written by japanese contemperary writers. These books also have both English and Japanese text side by side so you won't necessarily need a dictionary when reading.
0 votedApril 24, 20150My hometown
Hi. I'm Jiang Jiang from China. My hometown is the Yinchuan city, which is located in the northern west of China. Although I leaved there for 5 years lived here since I was born. It's been 5 years since I've left the city I was born in. It's a city with fresh air and the people live a simple easy lifestyle. And for that Because of this, I really miss the my life there.
Speaking of my hometown, there are a lot of delicious food like other part of China. But we have our specials specialties of our own. The mutton here back home is really fresh and delicious. With this, the delicacies like (you can type names in mandarin and give the english translation after) Mutton Eat by Hands(it's actually not) and Noodle With Mutton are well-known by in the country. In addition, there are many Muslims in our province unlike the other parts of China. I'm a Muslim too. So we create some cook delicious food with the characteristics of muslim food, such as fried pancakes.
Furthermore, the city my hometown has an easier lifestyle unlike compared to the big cities of in China. There are lesser people in my province than Beijing, lesser skyscrapers than Shanghai, and lesser cars than Guangzhou. Although it's a symbol of being undeveloped, area the city has great hospitals, great schools and great entertainment facilities. For example,the No.1 High School of Yinchuan is the top high of in China, and it ranked 98th at a in the list of the Chinese high schools.
Last but not least, my hometown has a great landscape. There are plenty of sand and desert there. And The Sand Lake, the most famous sight spot of Ningxia, it's is a really a great place to travel to. You can view the great landscape and surf in the arduous inclined sand incline at the same time. I can't imagine another any other thing which that can combines the excite excitement and joy so well.
A great place doesn't show it's glamour through words or images, it must be seen in person(?). I hope you go to China one day and visit my hometown, and I will treat you with my warmth and sincerity when you do.Please take note that you have to put a space after every comma and fullstop-> , and .
0 votedApril 23, 20151I wonder this expressions are okay.
X I remember him why he's Korean name is unique.
O I remember him whose Korean name is unique.
O I remember him because of his unique Korean name.
O His Korean name is so unique. That's why I remember him.
O His Korean name is so unique that I can't forget him.
X The uniqueness of his Korean name has engraved him in my brain. (see below)
O He has a unique name. That's why I remember him."The uniqueness of his Korean name has led/caused him to be engraved in my brain."
-> This sentence is quite weird and not very academic. The word "engraved" is not commonly used in this context. Usually it would refer to something or someone you will NEVER forget or something/someone you think about all the time. For example, "That scary image of the monster was engraved into my brain, I'm afraid that I will never be able to forget it."
For the rest of the sentences, you did really well! Good job:)
The basic meaning is the same but I wrote those sentences variously.
How about that?
Everything is okay?0 votedApril 23, 20151
