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    Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important? “Nowadays, it is true that a various types of music can be found in the world. Music is a vital part of human life. I would say that traditional music is more important than international music. This essay takes a closer look at this argument Without a doubt, music plays an important role in daily life. On the one hand, it can describe the deep feelings that words can’t. Music connects people, no matter what the language. On the other hand, it can lift people’s spirits and helps them feel better. Life without music would be boring. Why should traditional music be valued over the international music that is heard everywhere? Firstly, traditional music or folk music is one of national heritages. Traditional music can help people understand a country better. It represents the history, traditions and thoughts of a community. For example Vietnamese folk music is extremely diverse and it expresses spiritual cultural activities of country people. It is true that international music such as the R&B and rock …are more popular with youngsters than traditional music. However, international music is only for entertainment. It can be catchy, contemporary and exciting but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people. Furthermore, we can hear a modern melody everywhere in the world and it is hard to say which country it belongs to. In other words, the unique difference can help us make a deep impression on people around the world. Traditional melodies can symbolize a country's identity. In conclusion, music plays a central role in people’s spirits and I believe that traditional music should be given more importance than international music. It should be should be performed and made available to the public, particularly the younger generation.”
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    May 13, 2024
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