Hi Shyera. Ini harusnya masuk Inggris bukan Indo. Tapi coba aku bantu. Sorry klo dipisah2, aku ga tahan baca banyak tulisan dalam 1 paragraf.

1st notebook : Local Problem of Mining Exploration

I would tell about my experience (This is my experience / story) when I joined with exploration team at Halmahera, North Mollucas.

My team consisted of 5 peoples: two geologists, two mining engineers, and a surveyor. We explored a gold potential area and we worked for "company X".

This was a new exploration area. Our team was the first exploration team to travel there / Our team was the first team to explore the area.

We must pass one village from the / our accommodation to the exploration area. This village only has/had (pake "had" klo dulu cuma ada 1 jalan tapi sekarang udah ada lebih dari 1 jalan) one main road to access the area.

On the way to the area, some civil citizens / people blocked the road. We had to paid some money if we wanted to pass. It was happened everyday, not only once but twice everyday, when we went to the location and when we came back.

Then they created / set a benchmark price --> ini sebetulnya ok, cuma "benchmark price" kayanya kurang tepat. Aku lebih suka klo cuma "price" doang. If we didn't give it, they won't let us pass.

Kalimat diatas bisa diganti jadi --> Then they set a price that we must pay to let us pass their village / to go to the location.

We could make this as a simple problem by giving them the money. Actually it was not expensive. But I didn't like / opposed this idea, because if we let it happen now / pay it, it would continue / they would keep asking the money later.

This could be a big problem when the production / mining process had/has been running.

Klo sekarang udah ga mining lagi pake had.

So, I proposed my opinion to our team. They agreed with me, and then we discussed it. We got / found a solution that we must organize a counseling for the local citizens about our activity. --> counselling mungkin bukan kata yg kita mau disini. Mungkin lebih ok pake mediation

Meanwhile / In fact, their area was not included in our exploration locations. If we needed to pay money, we would like to pay it regularly/monthly in the right amount with a legal commitment.

Sejauh ini kesalahan yg banyak dilakuin:

1. Lupa a/an atau mungkin (s) klo plural.

2. Sesudah to/must/would/could/sejenisnya, pake V1, bukan past tense. cth: to pay, would buy, could make. Biasa "let" jg diikuti sama V1. cth: let it go (lagu frozen), let us / let's go.

The main point was not about the money, but about how the company made good interactions with the local citizens. Then we proposed it to the head office in Jakarta. They approved it and delegated some public relations to come.

The counseling (liat note sebelum ini) went smoothly and we created some commitments with the local citizen / people. Even the company hired some local citizens / people to be placed in the operation / mining area.

Aku ga pernah denger ada yg pake istilah civil/local citizen. Biasanya pada bilang local people. CMIIW

Everything went well until the exploration had been done (by us) and the company started the exploitation.

Tambahin "the company" biar jelas siapa yg ngelakuin exploitasinya. Bukan tim explorasinya kan?

Aku ganti kalimat diatas jadi --> Everything went well. We completed / managed the exploration and the company began the exploitation soon after we finished.

What i could have taken / What I can learn from that problem: the company, as a part of mining industry, need to give contribution for the local citizen / people. --> bisa jg diganti: the company must involve the local people in their activities.

The commitment(s) for environment, economic and social problem must be fulfilled. The benefit, which the company gets, must be balanced with the responsibility(s) to local citizens / people.

Utk commitment / responsibility, apakah mereka cuma punya 1 komitmen dan kewajiban?