My first experience of delivering a English presentation

I told myself to ignore the black statue on my left and focused on my audience who were chatting with each other . But I failed. It was Mr. Fei, my new English teacher, who was still in the corner of my eye and mind. Mr. Fei is a passionate and strict middle-aged teacher with a silky or occasionally, frightening voice. I set my sights on him, noticing that he wore that suit again which made him look more serious.

Standing on the rostrum alone, I took a deep breath and glancing at my classmates, looking for my group partners' seats. We spent a whole weekend on Mr. Fei's troublesome homework. Topic chosen, material gathered, posts designed, scripts written and rewritten, and here I was, trying to show our little crystallization of the wisdom and knowledge--a brief introduction to chocolate. I found them without much difficulty, for they sat fairly close to the rostrum, to me. And They both looked at me encouragingly, which gave me great comfort.

Mr. Fei's tough voice dispelled my visions of that weekend. 'Silence! 'He shouted. All chirps and twitters ended instantly. Then he turned back, standing looking towards me. Everyone else was waiting for me with total attention as well now.

'Hello everyone', I started and paused. Too cheerful, I thought. I resisted the urge to say my opening gambit again, and continued, 'Chocolate, as known to all, is well spread all across the world since--'

'Write it' the teacher spoken suddenly, 'Your topic. Write it on the blackboard'. My hands were trembling but I managed to grasp a piece of chalk. Then I misspelt the word 'chocolate'. Whole class burst into laugher when Mr. Fei pointed out my error in an understanding tone.

So far, so bad. I took another deep breath and resumed to recite our carefully edited script. I did not freeze on the stage for forgeting my lines. On the contrary, I paused a second time for speaking too fast and I failed to catch   my breath. My heart beat quickly and loudly. Two stressful minutes elapsed then Liu, one of our group members, stepped on the rostrum to help me present the post*.'Slow down your speed' she whispered as she walked pass me. I promised I would with a nod of my head. 

But I failed in calming myself down. I kept delivering my presentation quickly and my volume raised and raised in a state of great agitation. I gave them a glimpse. Liu sat there expressionlessly.

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only minor corrections, red bits are not neededlilac added extra wordit was ok would also sugest changing"post*"to presentation

Wish me good luck

I'm occupied with preparing for Ms office test during these days. Actually, I don't have faith in passing it. Whatever, I hope that I could pass. The tragedy is that my mobile data will run out.Maybe I will finish my entry in time on italki in the next week.(>﹏<)

Only minor corrections/alterations also try and leave spaces after commas and full stops, as the space denotes time for the reader to breathe..

Immoral....is too strong a word...have not highlighted the corrections and have removed a couple of words

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Unsociable Behaviors in Public ~please help me correct the composition, thank you

It's common to see various unsociable behavior in public for most people such as littering, spitting and jumping a queue. I had the experience of seeing a man seated near a window throwing out a plastic bag after he ate  his breakfast on the bus. Such phenomenon exists everyday in our culture.

It's universally acknowledged that unsociable  behavior in public does exert a negative impact to many aspects. For an individual, when one behaves uncivilizedly this lower others' respect for him to some extent. Furthermore, we are unwilling to make friends with such people for the most part this means bad immoral behavious will narrow one's social circles. For a society, it will damage the image of a city and a country if it's citizens act impolitely too frequently. There is no denying that our sense of social responsibility could be affected by inappropriate deeds by some people.

Only when we treat this problem, as seriously as it deserves,  will we accomplish the first step . It is vital to draw up stricter policies for government to punish people who behave uncivilizedly in public. Besides, more public-service advertisements are beneficial to cultivate people's civic consciousness and help them to be good from bottom of their hearts. Last but not least, schools and families have obligations to educate students to behave well in public. Via both efforts of all people, our society makes it possible to be better and better.

Slight typo  sentence (your missing the t)

quality, speed, reliability? What do you look for as a consumer? Well, I believe the answer lies in a combination of all of these elements
what does this sentence "What do you look for as a consumer?"mean?  does the author miss something in it？thx

Price is also a factor, as well as brand for many