Refresh

Today was a good day to me [more commonly "for me", but you are still correct]. I had met more new friends on the internet who come from the other countries. They helped me to correct my writing and showed to me my mistakes about grammer and structure. I had a good chance to practice speaking English with them on the Skype. We shared about the country of each other each other's countries. I have discovered interesting things. Although I keep stay at my home, but the a new world is opening in my eyes by because of my friends. Thanks to all of my friends.

***You are getting much better! Good job, friend! :D***

Northern lights

Yesterday, my friend called to my husband and informed him that there was the northern lights were in the sky. Our baby was sleeping, so we had to wake and dressed him. We went to the shore by car. There was were slight polar lights on heaven [I'm not sure what you mean by "on heaven"] and we made took some pictures there. When people become older, they became more lazy. Grownups need to plan to do something. Sometimes it is difficult for adults [or "an adult"] to do something unexpected or surprising. However we did it. We got ready so quickly, because the northern lights could not wait for anybody. If you want have an interesting, deep, saturated life, you must be easy-going. I'm glad that we have young minds and we have amazing pictures where are all numbers of my family [I don't understand this].

Learning of English

My name is Juliya. I am from Russia. I want learning to learn English because I want become a translator. Help me please.

Hey, I would appreciate it if you corrected my essay "Advertising".

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Answer

In the last 60 years the benefits and drawbacks of advertising have been heavily debated by philosophers, artists, politicians and businessmen. Although no one could argue that publicity brings with it several benefits, it is felt that advertising make us to purchase goods and possessions, which are not essential for our lives. This will be shown by looking at how human beings really need a few things to subsist and how improving spirituality is more important than owning having belongings.

Historically, modern economical systems have based their dynamics on creating needs in the population in order to generate revenues through of consuming. For example, in the film Fight Club, Tyler Durden, the main antagonist, stated that advertising made makes us buy things we do not need to impress people we do not like. To be happy, we need to satisfy our basic needs. This example shows that we could be easily easily be happy if we live simple lives, where we should not have to impress anyone by buying things we do not absolutely need. Therefore I agree with the idea that it is not necessary to obtain new products to improve our lives.

In addition to this, western cultures are recognized for not giving enough importance to spirituality. For instance, ancient Asian cultures have developed a high level of spirituality and welfare through practices [no comma] such as Yoga and Chi. As this illustrates, most people try to heal the spiritual dryness of modern lifestyles by owning unnecessary goods, and advertising takes advantage of this lack ["depravity", maybe?]. Thus, this is another reason why I feel that advertising sells us empty belongings.

After analyzing how it is not important to own lots of goods in order to build an accomplished life and how spirituality plays a crucial role in modern lives [not a complete sentence]. I feel that the idea that publicity encourages us to buy things we do not need is fully supported correct. It is recommended that modern societies start chasing happiness in spiritual fields in order to reach a general welfare.

Don't/Doesn't

1- She doesn't like of beer. 
2- I love Mother's Day. [capitalize names of holidays]
3- He doesn't like of your birthday.
4- I don't like of onions.
5- They don't want to speak.
6- I like to eat a lot of chocolate.
7- She doesn't want to go at to school. 
8- We need to speak English. 
9- He doesn't eat meat.
10- I don't have a pen.

Last lesson

This term of the class finished yesterday.

Students and I watched a movie and hold held a party at school.

I was happy that they enjoyed watching a movie in Japanse.

I have been teaching them Japanese for 6 months and next term I teach them I will teach them next term.

Spring vacation has just started. I want them to review this term....


I'm worried about students because most students almost forget the things which they learned! 

Anyway, I hope they spend have a good vacation!

***In English, there doesn't need to be a space before the ending punctuation.***

Is Are there any Brazilians living in New York or Miami?

I'm gonna live in the U.S.A. on in 2016 with my family - son and husband, and we're still planning our life. We still don't know if we're going to live in New York or Miami. That's because I want to live in NY and he wants to live in Miami. I'd like to know more about living in the US from a Brazilian and your experiences, mainly about schools for children and nannies 'coz my baby's just 1 and I'm terrified thinking about leaving him alone with people who I don't know nothing, but also about jobs. I'm a teacher and I'd like to work in this area, so I want to know if there are any schools that teach Portuguese and also if electric cars has have a lot of opportunities, because this is what my husband does and he doesn't want to work in another area too.

So, thank u for the help. I wish to find someone there who can guide me until me and my family my family and I get adaptation become adapted.
Hugs.