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Hi there! I'm a former art major, current computer science student, living in Los Angeles. I'd like to learn several languages for both recreational and professional purposes. I've always wanted to speak in multiple tongues, but never found the means. I'm hoping that italki will help me with that. Editing is also a hobby of mine. I'm not at English instructor level, but I think I'm pretty good at it. :) So, if anyone needs help with their writing, feel free to bother me. I hope I can help you!
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    Omegle is booty call?

    I'm very happy these days. I got many new friends from italki. They are come from different countries. We've talked about many interesting things.
    One of my new friends told me about this omegle app, so I got one to improve my English...but guess what, it's used as booty call! Almost everyone there asked if I'm horny... So I guess people there are trying to get laid. If someone is horny, they go to omegle...
    As a Chinese, I'm little shocked. But I don't judge them.

     

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    Oh jeez. I didn't know Omegle was for booty calls either.

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    March 15, 2015
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    They had a flat. He and his wife had a flat. I hope this helps you. ;)
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    March 14, 2015
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    The sentence makes sense. However, the punctuation needs correction. You can say, "The words want to run away from your mind. Chain them by writing." You have two complete thoughts, so a comma would not work in this case. If you want to keep the comma, you can also say, "The words want to run away from your mind, so chain them by writing."
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    March 14, 2015
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    The Saturday morning

    Every Saturday at 8 am I go to the swimming pool with my friend Ilya. We spend about 45 minutes there about 45 minutes and do swimming strokes in two styles: breaststroke and front crawl. The front crawl style is my weak point,. Ilya does it much better. For 45 minutes we pass over 1400 meters. After our swimming session we go to the cafe (especially McDonalds) and eat muffins with coffee and talk about things of last week. How do you usually spend your Saturday morning?

     

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    Nicely written! You used the colon and the parentheses correctly too.  :)  However, every week day word should always be capitalized (e.g. Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday...and so on). Your word order was also a bit funky, but I think you get the point. "The front crawl style is my weak point" and "Ilya does it much better" are complete thoughts, so a comma does not belong there. Great work so far! :D

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    March 14, 2015
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    Interest is the most important (Or, you can say: Interest is the most important thing)

    Modern time parents always take childen to attend different kinds of interesting classes, such as singing, dancing, playing an instrument and so go. Whatever you choose, I think interest is the most important thing. If you like it you study easily and quickly. If you don't like it, you will get into trouble.
    When I was a child, I liked dancing and singing the best. At first, my mother added me into a violin class. I was not interested in it so I felt bored and suffered. Every time the teacher didn't appreciate me. After several months I felt no confidence to go on studying. Also, I didn't play the violin very well. Finally I gave up on it. Meanwhile I began to study dance. Before the real class began I usually liked dancing by myself. I felt very happy when I danced. I anticipated the real class, so I studied very hard every time. The teacher usually gave me a high price and assessment. I am enjoy the dance class because I can find confidence in it. Day by day I love it more and more I study it better and better.
    In my opinion interest is the most important thing. Cultural interest ability is more important than study skills.

     

     

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    You've done a great job expressing your thoughts on studying subjects that interest you, and do not interest you. I was able to follow along easily. Your mistakes were mainly spelling errors and tenses. You should also know that the words "interest" and "interesting" are used differently. They both mean the same thing, but "interest" is a noun and "interesting" is an adjective. Keep up the good work. :)

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    March 14, 2015
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    March 13, 2015
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    March 13, 2015
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    Zweite Hinweis! Hallo! Wie gehts? Es ist sehr spät, aber ein Bauchschmerzen hält mich wach. Ich werde trinke Wasser. Ich hoffe das hilft. Sie haben eine Besseren Nacht als ich!
    March 13, 2015
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    March 13, 2015
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    首先注意! 中国是困难的。当它得到容易吗?
    March 13, 2015
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