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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development.
Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
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Evolution of computer sciences such as artificial intelligence has been a controversial issues in recent years. It is commonly believed by many scientists that computers are becoming smarter that human. Some researcher think this is an advantageous achievement whereas others regard this as a disadvantage. In my opinion, this can be a beneficial development if we manage how to apply them appropriately.
Opponents of improvements in computer sciences believe that the majority of people are becoming too dependent on computers. Indulgence in working with computers have made people, especially young children, more indolent in comparison to the past, so that many individuals are not able to do their tasks without using technology. For example, considering a bank office without any computers and ATM machines. Undoubtedly, the efficiency of their staff will be deteriorated considerably without the contribution of computers. That’s why it is considered as a negative point.
However, advocates of artificial intelligence and information technology think that this is a positive revolution of science. Nowadays, high-tech, sophisticated computers are capable of doing complicated calculations and programming. For instance, Computational Fluid Dynamics software packages, such as Fluent and ANSYS, can be manipulated for simulation of physical phenomena such as aerodynamic simulation of giant airplanes and Jets. Experimental approaches for testing such phenomena are so costly and time-consuming that many institutes cannot afford it. Furthermore, dealing with complex mathematics and physics is not theoretically plausible. Therefore, exploiting supercomputers is the best technique to resolve academic and industrial problems.
In conclusion, although too much dependency on computer intelligence have some disadvantages, the benefits they introduced to human beings outweigh their drawbacks.0 votedMarch 4, 20151My seventh composition - lack of subject
I never thought that I would be a regular writer in foreign languages. Well, I am not a good writer yet, but I am trying. Today, I have one problem: what should I have to write about? So, I could remember there are(were) so many famous authors that wrote about the lack of subjects or were uninspired. If they got it, I can do too. I am so pretentious! Never mind, I am just kidding!
Sometimes, when I start to write the words flow out of my brain and I make a quick composition, and other times, it's much harder. I don't know if It occurs because I am tired, lazy, or uninspired. Normally, I spend twenty minutes making a short composition, but now I just spend thirty minutes and have not finished it.
I Have to admited the famous authors are much bettrer than me!0 votedMarch 4, 20150Junk Food
The junk food is so dangerous because hurt harmful to our health. I think that the most important thing is our health and we must take care it. We must do a lof of sport exercise regularly and eat heathly.
However I think that people just think in its bodies and in the future this society where people will just look the physical and not inside of the personsHowever, I think that in the future people will just look at the physical part and not look at who the person is on the inside. (Or something like that..?)
0 votedMarch 4, 20150Let me introduce myself
I'm working as an engineer for the Oskol Electric Metallurgy Factory. I make different drawings, plans, schemes and 3D models.
I'm from Stariy Oskol, the(?) Belgorod region. But I was born in Salavat, Bashkortostan. I am married. My wife is 26, and she works for the same factory as me. I have a son, he's only six months. He's a very nice young gentleman.)) I graduated from Moscow University of Alloys and Steels in 2011. My speciality is iron custing.
I have been learning English for about a month. I'm going to take the KET. It's the one of Cambridge University's Exams of the English language. I'm going to pass all of these exams in three-five years. I'm trying to teach myself but it's not easy. I spend about three or four hours everyday studying.
I'm teaching myself. I'm using four books: Oxford Living Grammar Elementary, English Vocabulary in use Elementary, Oxford Word Skills Base and Essential KET. I'm also watching the cartoon Pepa Pig Film Friends in English without subtitles.
Finally, I'm listening to many dialogues, songs and topics.0 votedMarch 4, 20150CINEMA
Last week I went to the cinema. I didn't know what film I was going to see until I arrived there and saw the billboard. There were eight different films but some of them were unknown to me. After some time, I decided to see a French film.
This film was about a couple with four daughters. Each daughter was married to a man with a different culture. At first they didn't like each other but little by little they became friends.0 votedMarch 4, 20150
