Can I write that?

My favorite hobby is swimming because it is healthy and relaxing.


when I swim my life chance changes because I feel very good.

I use special clothing for swimming: a swim cap, goggles, and a swim lycra swimsuit.


I swim when I have time but the English Immersion program takes a lot of my time of me.





The English Immersion program is a program from the dominican republic that grants schoolarships to college students.

I wish I could swim, Claudio, it sounds very nice.

Hello again

I completely forgot that I have had a profile here. I'm still learning Arabic, now with Rosetta Stone, but I think speaking will be more useful when my level will be is a bit higher (or when my understanding has improved). Now I'm here again to improve my English. It is so far from what where I want it to be. :(

WATERPOLO!

Waterpolo is a team sport. No one knows exactly when it started, but it began in England.
It's played in the swimmingpool by two teams. Each team have has six players and one goalkeeper. Their equipment is very simple: a swimsuit and bathing cap. The local team usually wears some white bathing caps and the visitant visiting team wears some blue. Both goalkeepers wear it red caps.
Each team have has to score a goal with a the ball. The ball only can catch can only be caught with one hand except by the goalkeep who can with use two hands.
The players cannot step the on the floor because if they step do, the referee will blow the whistle and whistle call a technical foul. They can have hold the ball no more than 30 seconds and then, they should must attempt to make a goal.
Waterpolo is a fun sport. You will be get in form shape if you practice play this sport.

Looks like you are on the right track, keep up the great work!

3/13/15

I had dinner with bank staff yesterday and was supervised with surprised at (or by) their drinking capacity. No matter how much they drank, they were not drunk. I’m wondering if drinking well is a kind of both natural or trained?

I might say:

I had dinner with bank staff yesterday and was surprised at (or by) their drinking compacity. No matter how much they drank, they were not drunk. Im wondering if the ability to drink a lot comes naturally or if it takes training.

*keep up the good work

My English Goal

I started studying English in school after I had studied for on my own for two years. At first I didn't like anything we have had to do in school, but, after some time, I got interested more and more interested in the language, and, in three months, I passed advanced from A2 to C1 (with hours and hours of listening to music and movies).

I'm an amateur journalist, and, even when I'm not going to studying it in college, I love my "profession". So, about two weeks ago, I thought, "what do I want to do with English?", and I realized that I want to write well. And with by"well" I mean "WELL".

It could might be an unrealistic goal, but it's mine, and I'm the only one who knows how possible it is.

You write really well. Here are a few corrections to make this story flow naturally. Keep up the phenomenal work. 

I like would like to speak english

Hello. Today I'm gone going to ride in my bike to work

Hello! Looks like you are on the right track. Here area few corrections.