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I'm on vacation
hi everyone, I'm on vacation, until first days the first week of august, in this period I'll use it, for to get a job, to play soccer, to raise my English level get better at english , to travel with university friends and family, and I will benefit me myself of during this period for by reading English articles, I like it so much, to learn new expressions and words, I try to read the online pages like newspapers. in the future, I hope write extensive posts with a perfect grammar. regards.
Red = wrong or unnecessary
Blue = Not wrong, but not right
Purple = Things I added
0 votedJune 4, 20151- Practicing Spanish Conjugations With a Story Necesito practicar indicativo, progresivo y perfecto con un cuento. Referencia para mi á é í ó ú ü ñ ¿ ¡ One day, a brother and his sister were walking through the woods. Suddenly, they heard a noise. The man was scared, but his sister was brave. She looked into the woods, but saw noting but the trees. Her brother said, "I will not be afraid next time." they walked farther into the woods, and again, they heard a noise, and again, the brother was afraid. The sister said, "You would be brave, if you were not so scared." Un día, un hermano y su hermana estaba andando entre de los bosque. De repente, ellos oyeron un ruido. El hombre tenía miedo, pero su hermana fue valiente. Ella mirá en el bosque, pero iba nunca pero los árboles. Su hermano dijo, "No tenerá miedo el próximo tiempo." Ellos anduvaba más lejos en el bosque, y otra vez, oyeron un ruido, y otra vez, el hermano tenía miedo. El hermana dijo, "Tú sería valiente, si tú no así miedo."June 4, 201540
- Fotografía Me gusto sacar muchos fotos. Sobre el vaccación de primavero, yo toqué fotos para un competicion de mi escuela, y ayer, yo toqué fotos. Solamente toque fotos de plantas y cosas porque no tengo un modelo para los picturas. Yo pienso alguien fotos son bueno, pero tengo piensos segundos (second thoughts) a veces. Quiere crear un cartera para mi trabaja, incluyo fotos, deseños, y illustraciones.
May 1, 2015100 The Gift of the Magi by O´Henry (Book)
Moral Lesson:
The lesson of this story is about* the true meaning of love and its value. In the story, Jim and Della are a young married couple who are, by all appearances, very poor. When Christmas comes, both give up something that is meaningful in order to bring joy to the other. Because they do this out of love, what they really gives the eachother is the greatest gift, the gift of love. In possessing, the other thing that matters most to the other, Jim and Della are very rich, indeed.*saying "is about" is better than saying "concerns" because saying "is about" is what a native English speaker would do. It is not wrong to use the word "concerns" instead, but it's unnecessary.
0 votedMarch 6, 20150The last book I read was “ My Life as a White Trash Zombie”.
I enjoyed reading books about zombies and dreadful* people, that is the reason I read this book.
It’s about Angel, a smart, wonderful, and fantastic girl that, one day, she woke up in a hospital and she didn’t remember anything;. To make matters worse, she began to feel many different things when she smelled blood and she knew that something was wrong. Her behaviour in that moment surprised to me.
The atmosphere was really fascinating and the reader felt the desire to read more and more pages and . Also, the book had dramatic moments but it is especially a horror** book.
There are many memorable characters who helped to the main character to understand her new life.
I would recommend this book to anyone even those who do not like reading this kind of story because the writer manages to convince about the reader what would happen if it were be true.* dreadful or dead?
** Horror is a better adjective for a book because it is the name of a genre.
0 votedMarch 6, 20150- Información para mis compañeros futuros Escribo en este cuaderno porque pienso que lo sería un buen idea a mostrar los compañeros futuros mi nivel de español. Soy no muy bueno todavía, pero yo pienso que paracticar ayudará. Por ahora, yo preferiría un mujer a practicar con hasta que tenga más comodidad hablando español. Estoy a su disposición para hablar con video después 4:00 pm or 16:00 Central Standard Time/horario de la zona central de la mayoría de los días Yo preferiría nosotros hablamos en ingles durante quince o treinta minutos, y que nosotros hablamos en español durante quince o treinta minutos. Los subjectos en español que yo me gustaría practicar más: - Las comparaciones - Futuro y condicional - Las muchas formas verbales - gramática - hablar y escribir Los cosas que yo podría hacer con mi(s) compañero(s) - Nos Intercambiaríamos fotos de nuestras ciudades - Nos Hablaríamos de nuestros culturas - Nos Practicaríamos leer los cuentos o poemas - Si Usted tiene otros ideas, siente libre de decirmeMarch 5, 201540
