My favorite holiday

My favorite holiday is Christmas because we meet with my family to be together to share and enjoy the holiday.

The last novena is made, which is beautiful and many people come. Then we have a Christmas dinner and then open gifts and dance.

Nice job!

I would recommend all the same corrections as the previos poster with one change:

Last month, I went to Ireland. Dublin to be exact. 

That phrase sounds more natural than using "exactly."

Also, I agree that travel allows you to make awesome friends! I loved Dublin too when I went there!

Is the end of paper books?

In a technological society where smartphones, notebooks, e-readers and other devices have many abilities and uses (possibilities sounds awkward in this sentence, I would go for ..."devices have enabled so many possibilities" if that's the word you want to use), I wonder whether paper books would continue to have a space on our shelves. It is clear to me the utmost importance and utility of these devices, but nothing can replace the pleasure of leafing through the books sitting on a comfortable sofa reading remarkable stories. (This way the sentence maintains parallel structure and is not too long)

Recently I bought an e-reader and it seemed like a very easy way to find the books and dictionaries I wanted (bought is in past tense, so "want" should be too). I could read while on the bus, at work, or travelling and it was convenient when moving around and lighter compared to paper books. Also, it is possible to buy books online and have it available to read instantly. Isn't this amazing?

Nonetheless, I went to a bookstore last week to find something and I realized how amazing it is to have many different book collections, editions and covers from which to choose. Beyond that, (I would use "furthermore"), the atmosphere of sitting down having coffee and taking a glimpse (use glimpse or look, not both) at various titles is both very exciting and stimulating.

In conclusion, I believe everything in life has to be balanced. So, once we achieve more advanced devices or technologies, they should be enjoyed and used by people for convenience or delight. But it does not mean we need to sacrifice or forget the beautiful diversity of ways life can be enjoyed! As technological lover and book addict, I choose to have both in my life and they seem to complement each other.

I have discounts in fuel station.

In Spain, there are malls called “El Corte Inglés.” These malls have their own card, which is not for use at the ATM, it is for purchasing in its stores.
There are fuel stations called “Repsol”, and these accept the card from “El Corte Ingés.” I fill the fuel tank with my card from “El Corte Inglés”, and every three months they provide me discounts for buying in the malls again.
With this operation, they both win.
I drive a lot of kilometers each month, and with this, I win too.

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About me

Hello everyone, I'm Nicole and I'm from Brazil! I am 21 years old, and I am here to improve my English and Spanish, and I'll be happy to help people with Portuguese!