Summer is a beautiful season. The beautiful association that summer brings me comes from a beautiful title: A Midsummer Night's Dream. This is the name of one of Shakespeare's works. In China, the title of this work is more famous than the work itself. Thank Shakespeare for make summer a beautiful dream.

It will give me new opportunities for work, getting the latest achievements in science, and traveling to English speaking countries while communicating without any problems.

To learn more about other cultures and to be a better person.

Because to learn a language is to open the doors of communication and humanity

I am learning English because I live in the United States and it’s very complicated to communicate with others without speaking English.

I consume a lot of Korean media. I have since I was in early middle school. Eventually I got tired of subtitles and singing songs I didn't necessarily understand unless I had the english translation. So, I want to learn so that I don't have to rely on English translations anymore! Also, as I've gotten older, I've become more and more interested in learning about the culture and history of other countries!

How to talk with a foreigner?

There are many ways to talk with a foreigner, but if your spoken english is not very good, how could you say anything? I saw a video which said when you want to talk, you could use these words: what, where, when, how, and why. Then, if I asked them, it would be helpful. I was a student when I met my foreigner teacher. I felt that we had nothing to say, could it be that am I am not practicing enough? This could be a barrier, it made me feel down and I felt very terrible!

 

Over all, a good effort. One thing that stood out to me that you might want to try: only put capital letters at the beginning of words that are at the beginning of sentences, that are names of people (James, I is a speical case, but very important, etc..), and that are the names of places. 

Keep trying! You'll get there. Please comment if you didn't understand any of my corrections.

My car got hit last Friday...

 

I usually used to park my car on the streets, since there is not a parking space available in my apartment's car a lot.
I have to move my car every morning at <em>(This is optional, but it sounds more fluid. Note: You verbally would say "8 AM", not leaving the AM out.)</em> 8:00 am, because we can't park after that time.
On Friday morning, I went to the street where I had parked my car. Then I was at loss for words, because my car was dented badly.
There was a little paper, which had a written name and phone number, on the windshield. So I called the number.
Then a guy answered and I tried to explain what was going on, but I couldn't understand what he was saying... so I called my girlfriend <em>(This is one word, unless you are saying that she is just your friend, and not romantically involved.)</em> who is American, and asked her to talk with him. Then she explained fluently to him. <em>(Using the word "fluently" in this case is a little awkward, perhaps consider using "Then she explained to him what happened." instead?)</em>
After that she said a towing truck would be coming in 20 minutes <em>(I know it was just a shortage of the word, but in this case, the full word is much smoother.)</em>, so I wait beside of my car.
Then the towing truck came to where I was standing <em>(Using the phrase "the place" is extremely vague, so I would not recommend using it. Try to  be specific, it helps the reader understand what you are saying a lot more than if you don't.)</em>. Luckily <em>(Try to avoid starting a sentence with "and," it is at times necessary, but more often than not it can be avoided.)</em> he knew who hit my car and had information about the guy.
So I got it and said thank you to him.
From that information, the one who hit my car <em>(technically not necessary, but again, being specific helps with the flow.) </em>was a drunken driver....
Now I'm waiting insurance company's response..
What rotten luck!!

 

Pretty good job actually! Given that most of the corrections had to do with the flow of the words, I would say that you are getting somewhere significant with your typing. 

Just pay attention to the small words and the tenses. The tenses have to match, so that is a big key in the flow of any piece of writing. Just don't be afraid to be specific! Have fun with it, and use the thesaurus, perhaps at http://www.thesaurus.com/. 

Good luck!

Thanks