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    Miku's notebook entry: Mar 15, 2011

    About the earthquake in Fukushima city, 3/11

    I was in the classroom with my friends. We were writing reports on our computers.
    At first, when we felt the shaking, we thought it wast just a usual small earthquake. We had many small earthquakes these days, so maybe we were used to them, big or small. (?)
    But the shaking became stronger, we thought we had to hide somewhere immediately. We hid under the desks. I remember the earthquake in NZ, we couldn't move in fear. I thought the earthquake would last forever. I heard the screaming from my friends in another room.. but I couldn't help them.
    Under the desk we cheered each other up by saying "It's not problem at all!" "Are you OK?" "I'm OK, and you?"-we almost shouted but we couldn't stop it.
    I wished that the window panes wouldn't break. In the end they didn't break. 
    After the earthquake, the teacher ran up to our classroom and we went out to the playground. There were many aftershocks. It was scary and the weather became very cold, then it started to snow. All the students were talking loudly and laughing hysterically about their experience, maybe they wanted to relax subconsciously.
    I didn't know about how the earthquake affected the rest of Japan at the time, I just worried about my mom and grandma... (Fortunately, I found out that they were safe afterwards.)

     

    Many words and sentences aren't directly wrong, but give more meaning with slight alteration. On the other hand, that sounds like a terrible experience. Good thing you didn't get hurt.

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