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    My personality through the Tarantino's movies.

    I had already watched a Tarantino's movie, but I don't realy liked in that time, because I was a teenager and like other girls of my age I don't used to watch movies with violence and longs dialogs, I thougth boring.
    But now, I realy like it, and between the 8 movies he directed I watched 7, I think I growed up my movie style, and that made me think I will always change this but I have to try something new every time I'm going to watch a film, and that says a lot of things about my personality.

    Jaine,

    Very good! These are my suggestions: (Muito bom! Eis minhas sugestões.)

    "I had already watched a Tarantino's movie, but I don't realy liked in that time," -> Even though (ainda que) I had already watched Tarantino's movies when I was a teenager, I didn't really like them.

    "I think I growed up my movie style" -> "I think my taste in movies has grown." (Acho que minha preferência por filmes tem desenvolvido.)

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    July 24, 2017
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    Moving from Rio de Janeiro to Brasilia

    Hello guys,
    Today was a very different day for me. I had my things taken to Brasilia because I am in a home moving. Since I am in the a military, I have to be prepared for any move a sudden moving that is required for me. Last year, I did a military course and in the end, I was designated to go to Brasilia. I am from Rio de Janeiro but I have already lived in Brasilia for 2 years. Before I joined Navy, I was at the Air Force and this is the reason as to why I Iived in Brasilia already. I like Brasilia, it's a good city and calmer than Rio de Janeiro. I am just a little worried for going there on by my own. My husband is not coming with me because he's doing (taking) a course here in Rio de Janeiro. When I get there, I will have tons of things to do set. I have to receive the things and furniture of my house, receive my keys' apartment keys and have my apartment's lights turned on. The next hurdle will be have to present myself in my new job. I hope my life is good in Brasilia and I hope wish I like my future there. Today I am in my mom's house. My flight will take off (leaves) on Sunday. I am sure everything is going to be fine, but inside I am wildly anxious and nervous. It's very common to be afraid of the unknown, the important is to have a open mind and do your best. On Sunday I will give a strong cuddle to in my husband and family and I will be ready in readiness for everything that comes afterwards.

    Very good! You write very well in English. My corrections are in yellow. The ones in parenthesis () are recommendations. Best of luck with your move and new position! Your family is lucky to have you.

    Muito bom! Você escreve muito bem em ingles. Minhas correções são em amarelos. Os entre parênteses são apenas recomendações. Boa sorte com a sua mudança e com o seu trabalho novo. A sua familia é sorte para ter você!

    Chris

      

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    February 27, 2016
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    February 26, 2016
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    February 26, 2016
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    De volta ao italki

    Não escrevo no italki há muito tempo. Tem pessoas ainda aquí? Se alguém precisa de ajuda com um pouco de escrita em inglês, me avise.
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    February 25, 2016
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    April 24, 2015
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    A minha raposa

    Eu encontrei uma pequena raposa. O animalzinho foi ao lado da entrada de carro. Ele teve pequenos olhos pretos. Ele me olhou e eu tirei uma foto de ele com o meu celular. Mais tarde à noite, eu lo viu uma vez mais, mas não tenho visto-lo desde então.

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    April 22, 2015
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    EASTER IS DIFFERENT FROM PASSOVER

    Easter is the popular celebration; it is a time for sellings chocolates, eggs of chocolates chocolate eggs, and there is a rabbit, too. For some people it's a little bit strange, because rabbits do not lay eggs and also there is are no chocolate eggs.
    Passover is a Jewish festival, which celebrates the passage of the destroying angel passing over Egypt, without however, kill killing those who killed a lamb and spent spilled their the blood on the doorposts of their doors homes. We can see something on of this feast in the Bible, in the book of Exodus.

    Which kind of celebration is more strange for you?

     

    Very good, Rod! I agree Easter is very strange in the way it is celebrated. In America, it is - like most other holidays - a tradition that involves buying things, and not really understanding the original meaning of the occasion.

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    April 8, 2015
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    April 7, 2015
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    My kind of friendship

    I don't have many friends... I like to talk to lots of people, but the word "friend" is very serious for me. I have two friends, and I know that I can trust them. One of them isn't so close to me... Actually my kind of friendship is one that I can spend years without speaking with someone and when I do that things are exactly how they ever were*. But I also think that's that it's important to say "hHello, how are you? You How's life? Your studies? Your family? How are you feeling?" <em>at </em><em>le</em><em>ast </em>once in a semester...

     

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    Actually, in my kind of friendship, we don't have to speak for years, and then, when we do reconnect again, things are just how they always were. [Or something like that].

    "Na verdade, no meu tipo de amizade, não temos de falar por muitos anos, e então, quando nos encontrarmos novamente, todo é como eram antes."

     

    Very good.

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    March 30, 2015
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