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- Using vocabulary about crimes - Challenge Writing, One Essay Per Day The text was based on the report presented by BBC. http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/resources/idt-dc75304f-e77c-4125-aacf-83e7714a5840 Terrible issues has been being covered up for years in a small town of Canada called Winnipeg and involves have gotten away with it. Many aborigine girls were beaten up and thrown into the local river. However the neighbors grass the authorities up, anyone was sent down so far. The racial character is clearly related to those crimes as in this area the chance of being kidnapped, went missing or be found murdered is four times more likely to happen to aborigine rather than to occur with other Canadian girls. Recently, a local resident tip the police up that some guys had been presenting a strange behavior by driving their car around for many hours as if they were looking for something or someone. Two policemen found, after inspection, guns inside the vehicle and put them away. However their lawyer alleged that someone set them up placing the guns there, so the case was filed and they went free. One week later a girl was found tied up inside this very same car, luckily she was still alive. Text 016/365. A friend ( Luiza Zerlotini) and I are going to write an essay each day for a year! Please help us with corrections, suggestions and ideas.April 10, 201510
- Internship - Sometimes the company does not fit you - Challenge Writing, One Essay Per Day An automobilist company, which is placed close to my city, was taken over by another one. Since then, they‘ve been cutting back on spending. I know, for example, they’ve been laying off many of their staff. As a result some of the management team have stand down because they become snowed under with work. However the internship students they are slaving away now they’ve stopped taking more students on. I had applied for an internship there, I filled in my curriculum and handed it in to them before the companies’ fusion, meanwhile I don’t appreciate this company anymore, even if they return to hire students I will get out of it. Text 016/365. A friend ( Luiza Zerlotini) and I are going to write an essay each day for a year! Please help us with corrections, suggestions and ideas.April 7, 201500
Roma nos anos 1600
A Contrarreforma é está em seu zênite (apogeu) porque pois quando o monge alemão Martinho Lutero começou a Reforma Protestante em 1517 quase todos são analfabetos e a Igreja Católica governava suas vidas. Para ensinar às pessoas cenas (passagens) da Bíblia, muitos artistas devem tinham de criar pinturas que as mostrassem (representassem). Deste modo há trabalho para muitas pessoas e artistas do próximo e distante chegam em Roma. Também ( entre todos) um jovem pintor, que se chama Michelangelo Merisi da Caravaggio, chega em Roma sem nada. Depois de pouco tempo faz pinturas que mostram jovens ingênuos que estão sendo enganados das por pessoas hábis.
Pintava também muitas pinturas religiosas, mas desde sempre mostravam (representava) os personagens como pessoas reais e não como santos, tinha uma relação tensa com a Igreja. Era também notório para as brigas, matou um homem numa luta com espadas em 1606. Escapou de Roma e era em fuga tornou-se um fugitivo o resto da sua vida, mas pintava obras-primas em Napoli e Malta, por exemplo, o quadro em que Davi que está agarrando a cabeça de Golias com a cara de Caravaggio.
Recebeu uma promessa de perdão quando esteve em Napoli e provou voltar em Roma. Em vez de disso morreu em Porto Ercole em 1610 de febre.Escreve muito bem, parabéns.
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