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2015.06.30
Now, I am sure about one thing.
I want to seek better jobs work <em>OR</em> a better job abroad.
I want more inspiring, exciting things in my life.
To survive in a foreign land, I need to prepare for several a couple of things.
1) English
Currently, I am working on computer science things in computer science and it just requires which mostly uses English.
Without some googling and enough time searching for example sentences, I can't make natural sentences.
When describing things or ideas, or telling stories, I found find my English is really immature.
It is not hopeless, but it's never enough for to fully giving give you my idea. to you.
2) Food
I like the sea. I wish I could live in a city near the sea.
I can eat all kinds of sea food seafood, but meat, animals like pigs, cows are like pork and beef, is not my favorite.
Actuallly, too much greasy and oily foods makes me sick.
I want to have a food list list of foods that I can eat in the my daily life there.
It's time to for bed here.
Good night.--
Note: You shouldn't make a new paragraph each time you begin a new sentence. Your writing will flow more naturally if you group related sentences into paragraphs. For example, your section on "English" could be one paragraph:
1.) English
Currently, I'm working in computer science, which mostly uses English. Without some googling and enough time searching for examples, I can't make natural sentences. When describing things or ideas, or telling stories, I find my English is really immature. It's not hopeless, but it's never enough to fully give you my idea.
Your writing will also sound more natural if you use more contractions ("I'm" instead of "I am," for example). Except in very rare circumstances, it won't make you sound inappropriate or informal.
0 votedJune 29, 20151Please correct my sentences!
Last Sunday, I did a volunteer activity at a home for the aged. It was my second time visiting there. We used <em>origami</em> (folding paper), and made <em>azisai</em> (a flower name) together. One old woman looked pleased, and she said she wanted to display the <em>azisai</em> which I made. I was very happy to hear that! I put up my <em>azisai</em> on the wall in her room. We also helped the staff to clean wheelchairs. I want to visit there again.
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In English, we use italics (<em>italics</em> - slanted letters) to write foreign words.0 votedJune 29, 20150
