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1.Also working condition can be inside or outside the factory or plant, usually this job is connected with heavy and noisy equipment. Electro mechanics need to wear safety boots and safety glasses for to be safe in dangerous situation.
2.Based on given information given on the many professional websites the average hourly wage in Canada for Electromechanical Technicians is $25 per hour.
3. Skills and experience in given trade is associated with higher pay for this job.
The total wages depends upon the field of activity of the company and from operational experiences of the worker.
4.I am interested in this given program because this trade is in demand and well paid. Except for that There are also many various industries where it is possible to work.
I like to make problem solving decisions and I have some skills in repairing broken equipment. I like to make reparation and maintenance. I know how to use soldering iron, I have some knowledge in electrotechnics.
5.I have chosen this career because it meets my requirement. The average wages are competitive. There are many working place in different industry all over Canada. Also I’m interested in electronic appliances and in the way how do they work and how can I fix the problems if they have. I like to repair and change spare parts. This career also opens new professional horizons for me and helps me to increase my aptitude and skills.

More Correct would be either: 1) Which bus number stops near your house? or 2) Which bus route stops near your house?

There are a few ways you may say this correctly: 1) From whom did you get a very funny email yesterday? 2)Who did send you a very funny email yesterday? or 3) Who did you get a very funny email from yesterday? Hope this helps!

I would say: "I am free the whole day on Saturday." or "I would be free on Saturday."

hello, everyone.

Hello, my dear friends. I'm very glad to see you again.
In fact during these days, because of the Exams I couldn't check my I-talki inbox as best as possible and actually I couldn't have write a notebook entry.

These days I had a lot self-study at home and I learned a lot of words in these 3 days.
Well, let me tell you what happened exactly during these days:
about two weeks I couldn't do anything because I had to study hard for my exams & I think they were so easy.
For about 3 days we had vacations and I was able to do everything with my computer. and Last night I found 5 fascinating websites.
they were all in English.
And I hope that you accept my excuses ...
HAVE A NICE DAY, BYE BYE

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