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November 2, 2015
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Today, it was very cold and windy.
Lately, the weather is not so cold although it is winter in Korea. But today was very cold suddenly. I could hear the sound of the wind from outside of my house. The wind was so strong. Everyday I go out for a walk but I dont want to go out today because it is very cold and windy. I should be careful not to catch a cold.
