Hi! I found this blog post which might be helpful: http://www.grammarphobia.com/blog/2011/12/especially.html I think we usually put "especially" before what it modifies, which is not necessarily the verb. In your first example, "especially" goes before "love" because those are the songs that you love the most out of the soundtrack. Your emphasis is on your preferences. In your second example, "especially" would go after "Song Gang-Ho" because he, out of all of the other actors, gave the best performance. Your emphasis, in this example, is on Song Gang-Ho giving a better performance than the other actors. You can switch these around, as well! If you want to say that these three songs fit the movie, you could say: "These three songs especially fit the movie." This would put emphasis on the way the songs function in the movie. If you want to say that you particularly loved Song Gang-Ho, you could say: "I especially loved Song Gang-Ho in his role in the movie." This puts emphasis on your feelings about the actor. It all depends on what you want to put emphasis on! I hope that makes sense! :)

No, and it could get you in trouble if you use one when you mean the other. A mistress is someone that a person has an affair with when they are dating someone else or when they are married to someone else. A lover is a romantic/sexual partner. A lover could be someone's wife, husband, girlfriend, boyfriend, someone they are having an affair with, or someone they just have sex with. A wife or a girlfriend is a lover, but not a mistress. A mistress is a mistress and a lover.

2 - She does not know why she has to be fined. (If she knows that she is going to be fined in the future for something she has already done) or She does not know why she has been fined. (If she has already been fined) 4 - He wants his mother to come home. or He wants her to come home. The other two are perfect! :)

Could someone correct this essay?

It’s obvious that the world is changing and it’s obvious that men people ("Men" makes it sound like male people specifically are to blame, rather than mankind as a whole.) are blame for this situation. A long time ago, scientists already said that the climate was going to change if governments weren’t aware about CO2 emissions but nobody heard them. As a result of this, the hole in the Ozone layer is getting bigger and bigger and the planet is getting warmer due to the greenhouse effect. Nowadays (Consider using "Today" instead of "Nowadays." "Nowadays" is very informal for an essay.) it does not seem to be a problem for the mankind but it will be a very serious problem for our offspring. It’s quite selfish, but it’s a reality. Governments make hold international meetings about the environment and there, they set lots of laws in favour of this issue and set high fines for those countries that do not carry out these plans, but countries prefer to pay a fine that rather than reduce its their emissions. Greenpeace is the only one that understands the terrible global situation and everybody should support them. Families should recycle at home and look after the nearby environment. We must look after the world because it’s our home.

Yes! If a person is meticulous, they organize things very neatly or dress themselves very neatly. If an object is meticulous, then it's something that has been organized very neatly, probably by a meticulous person. :)

Yes, you're right. They mean the same thing. :)