Yes, that's right, always or at any time. The phrase "all I ever need" typically expresses a sense of completeness or satisfaction. When someone says "you're all I ever need," for example, they're conveying that the person they're speaking to fulfills all their emotional, physical, or material needs. It implies that nothing else is necessary or desired because that person or thing satisfies them completely. It's often used in romantic contexts to convey deep affection and attachment.

I'm not a professional teacher but it looks correct to me. Jazz had some very good advice for you. Nice work.

Raspy is an adjective that describes something rough and uneven. Something that is not smooth, in this case, is a rough voice like someone who had been screaming or shouting for a long time. Used like this, it also sounds annoying or unpleasant.

I prefer cheap and safe accommodations to live.

She came to my room and open the door in purpose left my door opened up without feels guilty She came to my room and opened the door, then left the door open on purpose without feeling guilty.

Grammar can be tough sometimes and is probably better corrected by a professional teacher rather than a community tutor.