Search from various English teachers...
Profile
Learning
Spanish
Language Skills
EnglishNative
Lesson Feedback
Lesson history
 Last monthLast 3 monthsAll time
Completed lessons000
Attendance rate100%100%100%
Teacher reviews
No record
Activities
  • Corrected

    Last week a dog came to my house.

     

    I usually take dogs who that are in an animal shelter to my house as a volunteer.
    They are lost dogs. Most of them are very thin, dirty, don't believe trust in humans.
    I take care of them. Sometimes it takes a long time to make them healthy and open their hearts.

    Then I look for their new foster parents.

    All the dogs I took have taken care have found their a new home house. I'm so happy when I know they will have a spend happy life with their new owner.

    I live with my mother. She wanted to have her own dog. I hesitated because she is old. If she will be becomes sick, I have to have her dog until that dog's last moment of life (it would be better to say: I will have to take care of that dog forever).
    I'm not sure I can live for over 10 years. ( Nobody knows though..)

    Last week, I have decided that my mother has should have a dog.

    A dog who that came to my house is a cute little mixed shiba..

     

    Very well done, just a few grammatical errors here and there.

    Your original text was, however, completely comprehensible before corrections were made.

    0 voted
    February 1, 2015
    3
  • Corrected

    Muslce Pain

     

    Today, I have muscle pain because yesterday I was been playing tennis for about 4 hours, and also today I also had to play tennis, because I'm a tennis coach. But Today, my tennis playing was very good. The ball that I hit go there I thought that I wanted to make go.

     

    The last sentence doesn't make sense. Overall a good effort though!

     

    0 voted
    February 1, 2015
    1