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Hi there, I am Amber from mainland China, I recently live in Australia and am preparing for IELTS exam,(apparently I am studying English now). I need to improve speaking and writing. Hope can meet some new friends that can help me out. btw, I speak Mandarin very well ( of course), anyone who wants to speak with me or who want to learn anything about China, please feel free to contact me :P
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    An IELTS composition The question is: In most countries, prison is an effective solution for the problem of crimes. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Here is my composition: Some people believe that imprisonment is more effective than education in terms of solving crime-related problems. I disagree with this view because, from my point of view, they are equally important for building a harmonious society. Indeed, sending criminals to prison is vital for justice. It is no doubt that people are responsible for their behaviors. Once they have done something illegal, they may face charges and be punished. The fear to stay in prison can effectively stop some potential criminals from doing things they would regret for the rest of their lives. In addition, prison provides a good opportunity for criminals to reflect their acts, thus behaving good after the prison terms. The existence of prison is absolutely powerful to punishing and deterring crimes. A better education, on the other hand (in the mean time?), plays an indispensable role in the solution to problem of crime. Firstly, education provides people with knowledge regards of how to distinguish right and wrong, legal or illegal, especially in developing countries. A survey conducted in 2013 revealed that 10% of defendants in criminal courthouses defended that they were not aware what they had done were illegal. If they had had the knowledge, they would have avoided ending up in prison. Secondly, public are educated about the consequences that a crime would cause, thus having fear of being in jail. Without a close-up look of the punishments, some people might think that it is possible to get away with crimes. Therefore, the effect of a better education on crime cannot be ignored. In conclusion, I think prison and a better education are both important and equally effective in solving crimes.
    March 3, 2015
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    A composition about technology Many people think that early technological developments have accomplished more achievements in terms of increasing people's life quality than recent technological developments did. I disagree with this view. Firstly, recent technology revolutionised our way of living. The appearances of smartphones and wireless internet connection represent that the way of communication entering a new age. By using these new technology, people are able to contact each other no matter where they are without paying expensive telephone fees. The interaction in global scale has become more affordable to normal people.Any one can interact with celebrities, super stars and politicians in social networking apps such as Facebook , Instagram and twitter, because everyone can access to them with little cost. I believe there helped people more than the invention of telephone did. Moreover, the early technological developments emphasise developing principles, while recent technological developments are targeted at application scientifically innovation. The majority of scientifically technology that people are using nowadays in their daily lives, business communication and health care services are introduced during the past two decades. Many old machines and devices have been obsoleted sine they were no longer difficult and effective compared with new machines and devices. Last but not least, the development of on technology is usually a long-term process that might take decades even a hundred years or so. All the recent developments and innovations are based on the early researches and inventions. For example, the computer and the lap-top, the home-line telephone and the mobile phone, all developed from the former to the latter. In most occasions, identifying early and recent developments can be difficult. In conclusion, I disagree the the view that recent technological developments helped people less than early technological developments did.
    February 28, 2015
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    some people 2 :P Some people think the best way to solve traffic jams and pollution problems is increasing the petrol price. However, there are other measures can be used to solving those problems.
    February 2, 2015
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    some people Some people think that increasing the number of sports facilities is the best approach to improve public health, while others argue that other measures are required.
    February 2, 2015
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    Latest IELTS result released I'd like no to mention how many times I took this exam ( I feel I can write a book about it T_T). I just receive the result of latest one I took this month. Unfortunately, I do not get the target score which is 7 band in each section ( listening, reading, writing, speaking). I feel sad.....I typed "how to improve English writing" then I found this website, so I registered. I hope I can really get some corrections and comments on my writing. Anyway, this entry is for saying hello to everyone who would like to make comments to me in the future.
    January 23, 2015
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