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I hope this helps! These are just conversationally smoother... but you've got the right idea!
6)
a: what time did you start the game? >>>> 언제 게임 시작했어?(korean mean)
b: I started it just now.
a: Don't lie to me! The moniter already hot!!! or The moniter already get the heat!a: When did you start playing the game?
b: I just started playing now.
A: Don't lie to me! The monitor is already hot!
7)
a: Kelly, I just booked the movie now.>>>>> 캘리, 나 방금 영화 예약했어.
b: what movie are we going to see?
a: we'll see the horror movie.
b: I don't like the horror movies, should we change to another one?>>>>나 공포영화 싫어해. 우리 다른거로 바꾸면 안될까?a:Kelly, I just bought tickets to the movie.
b: What movie are we going to see? (You can also say, What are we seeing? or Which one?)
a: It's a horror movie.
b: I don't like horror movies! Can we pick a different one? (or Can we pick a different movie?)
8)
a: Did you solve the question 4?
b: Ah,,,,,I can't remember what I wrote! what if I'm wrong?>>>> 아,,,, 뭐라고 썼는지 기억할 수 없어. 틀리면 어떻하지?
a: Almost everyone couldn't solve the question.>>>> 거의 대부분이 그 문제 못풀었어a: did you get question 4?
b: Ah... I can't remember what I wrote. What if I'm wrong?
a: Almost everyone missed it.
9)
a: are you possible to drink today?
b: Fine. don't worry about me
a: what if you get laid off? you already got late 3 times!!>>> 너 이미 3번 지각했잖아!a: Did you drink (alcohol) today?
b:I'm fine. Don't worry about me.
a: what if you get laid off? You were late 3 times already!
(I think it is what you mean... I'm sorry if it's not!)
10)
a: what are you doing now?
b: I'm tuning my car.
a: what if the car breaks down?
b: It's right up my alley! Can you stop talking anymore?>>>> 이건 내 전문이라고! 더이상 말 걸지마.I'm not sure what's going on in the situation. Is a wife bothering a husband and he wants her to stop talking to him?
If yes, we would just say, "Leave me alone." "Let me do my thing." "Stop talking (to me)." "Shut up."
0 votedOctober 11, 20160I think you did a great job! Here's how I would make it more conversational!
It's hard to go out of my 'safety zone'There is a famous quote talk, 'Everything has a single step'. Everyone knows that. However, not all people move their thinking into action. Stepping out of our safety zone is very difficult, but it's essential to improve our quality of life quality. For now, I will not be afraid to go out my safety zone and I'll crush all obstacles to stepping out in my way.
'천릿길도 한 걸음 부터'라는 말은 유명합니다. 모두가 그걸 알고 있지요. 그렇지만 모든 사람들이 생각을 행동으로 옮기지는 못합니다. 자신의 안전지대로부터 빠져나오는 것은 매우 힘들지만, 삶의 질을 높이기 위한 필수적인 것입니다. 지금부터 저는 제 안전지대를 빠져나오는 것을 두려워하지 않을 것입니다. 그리고 방해하는 모든 것들을 돌파할 것 입니다.0 votedJanuary 20, 20151안녕하세요! I think you did a really great job. Here are just a few corrections to make it a little more conversational. I hope it helps and let's be friends!
first note
I just joined this website and I am really happy to be know here.
I think I can make goooood friends and have also expect Language exchanges!
I will try to do my best to teach Korean to my future friends.
Who's is Who will be my first friend?0 votedJanuary 20, 20150I think the two corrections above me did a great job helping with corrections. I thought I would share how to make it coversational. :}
Introduce IntroductionI want to work for Starbucks because I hear it's well-managed and cares about the welfare of its employees heard it's well manager abd cares for the welfare of its employees. I came to Canada for to learn English and self-improvement to improve myself, but I have need a work permit. The reason is I want to pay money for everything by myself, so I have to work. And in case of As for Starbucks, they have chain stores in whole locations all over the world. I think there is a reason for it. So, I want to work for Starbucks, not another store.
Weakness I have is lack English My weakness is English, but in case of order since the order patterns are similar, I will to master how to take orders. And I really want to speak English very well and make friends. My roommate says that I am very friendly. I think so too i am friendly also. So I will to work hard and have good relationships with partners others.0 votedJanuary 15, 20150
