Lovers

I want to share how to find a soulmate. In the past, I was always to be attracted by to some men who are were very soft, tly,chary kind, and considerate. But when we fell in love, I found that's it wasn't not true love. I just wanted to find some a guy s who will take care of me. For a long time I have thought so I used a long time to think about this problem, and I really want to know what is the important between the lovers. I have also read some books about sexual relations (OR about sex, OR about relationships).than I found the answer to why I always need a softly gentle man to love me. It's because I didn't get enough attention and love from my parents when I was a child. In fact, this is my own problem, and I should solve it myself. It's wrong to hope to find a man who can will care for me and who can give me enough patience and love, because no body can do this for the my whole life. I also found a that it's a little boring to fall in love with such a man. So I try to use find some ways to make let my heart to grow up. and Then I have found I don't love the a man who is just softly gentle anymore. Now I think the most important thing between the lovers is something else.

1) When you make a list seperated by commas, you must end the last item with an "and" or and "or/nor"

2) You are speaking in past tense most of the time, so you need to watch your verbs when you do that

3) Don't forget spaces after periods and commas.

4) Typically we don't say "about sexual relations" - it sounds like medical speak. We would say about sex, or about relationships

Going To Germany

I will go went to Germany a few days later, and I was lucky enough to get a student visa quickly. I was waiting from 28th, October 28th to 24th, November 24th, and the period is was really tough. After giving my application files to visa office, I felt so nervous, and I found a big mistake. I thought I could get visa if the visa officer got mental disorder. Finally I got it, which is so important for me. that It could change my life. It means that I could start new life and forget the bad past. Though I have no religion, I still think what happens I get is by the help of The God. I dreamed of studying abroad for many years and never thought it could be happening on for me. I didn’t feel very excited when gettingI got the visa, because I have to wait. must win. I don’t have big dreams in life, but now the only dream I have has came true. I really want a good home with warmth, but it seems so selfish. too greedy I have been satisfied what I have already, so walking in dark and move on.

Your last sentence didn't make any sense in English, I I don't know how to help you with that. The same with the visa officer sentence...it doesn't make sense in English, but I don't know what you are trying to say in order to correct it. The majority of your errors are related to the tense you are trying to write in. You tend to switch from present to past tense, and when you do that, it makes it confusing to read. Hope this helps.

Could you please correct this for errors? Thank you!

1.Hostility and anti-collaborative behavior is sometimes present between persons employed during different administrations in government institutions. If not managed in a diplomatic way, this can negatively affect the development of projects.

I was once directly confronted to this situation. As I have learned with my intercultural experiences, must most situations of distrust are created because of misunderstandings and the fear of the unknown. I believe that this affirmation revelation can also be made for applied to corporate culture. That This is why a good team player should try to fight group segregation within an institution and promote the building of relationships.

To resolve the problem in this particular institution, I decided to propitiate social interactions between my team and the employees of another office, which were particularly resilient to collaborate with us. I would personally make sure that they were always invited to our activities. We would use this setting to socialize and communicate with them, which allowed us to know each other as collaborators and not as adversaries. Even though simple, this strategy served to reduce hostility. Afterwards our efficient collaborations augmented improved significantly.

Corrections below 

Are you into soccer?

I am not into soccer nowadays, but there was a time where I used to love soccer. I was playing it so much that I think I got bored. I don't enjoy it anymore, but when it comes to the world cup, it's different. I love the passion that this competition creates all over the world. I am wondering how much money the top soccer players are able to make. I guess plenty of money. Maybe it wouldn't hurt to watch a few games after all, and maybe I'll start digging into the sport again.

1) If you use the word "but", typically a comma precedes the word.

2) Watch "run on sentences." If you are taking a breath while reading, there should be a comma or a period where you paused to breathe.

3) You used commas where a lot of periods should go, which contributed to the appearance of run on sentences.