The Internet.

Do you think that the internet helps us a lot and makes our life easier, or it's just a wasting of time? In my opinion, the internet helps us a lot and makes our life easier for these two reasons. To begin with, the internet helps us to connect with people who are is faraway from us, so it lets us keep in touch with others even if they are not in at the same place that we are in. For example, it helps you meet to know people from the other side of the world, which and that could be a reason to improve yourself by seeing many kinds of people. It can also can helps you to connect with your family if you are studying abroad. Second, the internet helps us to get information about anything in just a moment of searching, so if you don't find some any information that you would like to know in your library, just search on in the internet. It shows you the news of the world while you are in your house, which so that helps you to know what is happening around you without even moving from your place. To conclude, that's why the internet helps us a lot and makes our life easier.

Nice essay!

Migration

It is a widely held perception belief that immigrants should abandon their own ways and adapt to new local customs in their adopted country.; Personally, I totally agree with this point of view. It is so crucial for newcomers to get gain a deeply understanding about some basic cultural aspects of their adopted country so that they can easily adapt to their new environment. If immigrants do not have know any of the rules or have vital knowledge of the new country, searching for a job or communicating with native people seems like a big barrier. Instead, abandoning their own behaviors and integrating into the new place can bring them more opportunities to succeed as well as help them avoid some unwanted conflicts among people at work or in public. Therefore, to emerge in a new environment requires immigrants to make know essential changes.

This was very well written! Here are a few notes about my edits:

1. I changed "perception" to "belief," because a perception is an impression of something (such as "immigrants who don't learn local customs are ignorant"), whereas a belief is an opinion like the one you stated.

2. I deleted your semicolon (;) because when reading this entry aloud, it sounds better with a complete stop after "adopted country." Otherwise, it becomes a very long thought.

3. I changed "get" to "gain," because "gain an understanding" is a very common phrasing for that idea.

Got out of the Left town, came though the coal mining area and the wide and quiet field, crossed the long slope with overgrown bushes and a large area of tea-oil trees, then through the graveyard at the end the slope, walked down the slope and crossed over a stream, then we could finally got home.

I love your  description! It was well-written, too. I just had those 3 corrections. I changed "Got out of town" to "Left town," because "get out of town" has another meaning. When someone tells you an unbelievable story, you can say "Get out of town!" which means "I can't believe what you're telling me is real!"

Tengo Estoy aburrida.

yo Practiqué mi el español y el francés hoy. El francés es mas que difícil que el español. Yo Leí artículos en español y escuché a musica en español. Me gusta Aventura (pues, ellos ya no es son un groupo ahora) pero Romeo Santos es guapo jaja. Hmmm...que más? No sé. yo Cociné comida para el almuerzo y la cena. Ahora, tengo sueño. Mañana iré al gimnasio. Buenas noches a todos.