DIARY OF SUPER POWER

10th March Weather: raining 

I wake woke up when the rain started and I do did it again.

Every day, I will find a stranger and I will read his mind. Yes, I have some a super power , someone once called it 'Psychic abilities'. 

I don't remember how many times I have done (used) it, maybe 1000, maybe more than 1000. 

This man looks like a hobo, a very young hobo, his age can not be over 30. You will never know can't see the colour of his clothes, his clothes's colour, because it's looks like dark blue, black and maybe green. 

His mind is a little bit bored boring, something about food, something about money and something about a woman. Well really bored boring. So I take a deep breath and decide to ended (stop) it. While But when I close the window curtain I realise I read something different else. Something still form the hobo, but it's seems more dark, more ambition ambitious and bloody. So I saw look at him again.

I saw a young man, just standing, near by the hobo, and they it looked like they were talking together. The hobo looked like he was getting angry，yes the young people insulting person must have insulted him. 

The hobo's mind is was very erratic, it seemed like he is was fighting within himself. One First he said (thought) : I'm gonna kill him. And then other he said (thought) : don't!

I observed that the hobo's hand had become different (while I was looking at it), it's was white, and I even saw some ice present appear from his finger. He has had super powers too! 

I'm afraid that the young man will die, as a result I try to use my superpower to tell the young man: Run!

Before I could tell him that, the hobo just put his hand down. He didn't kill him? He didn't kill him!

In the hobo's mind I saw he heard him muttered: I'm not a killer, also the my power shouldn't hurt anybody.

Then I saw the hobo say something to the young man. Something like ask the respect. I think he was asking for respect. I closed my curtain, that was enough for today it's enough.

"Bad weather but nice day!" I told myself.




ps: I should describe some super power...
well I don't know is if it looks like some a superhero's diary? :)

Really nice story Fio. You have definitely tried a complex structure in your tenses for this one. We can go over it together whenever you are ready. Peace. Alasdair

Why I am not that woman you fall in love with..

I have come to the conclusion that I am not that woman you fall in love with. Maybe it's the woman you respect, or you admire. (Not sure if your are talking about yourself or another women here?) I am that woman who forces you to question perspectives which you have been living had for years. The woman who finishes with these stops the preconceived notions you have of the things you love, the woman that you look at and you wonder: How does she do that? The woman you are looking for when you need strength and support, the woman who makes you realize how big it can become the world can become. (Not sure what you mean here?)

However, I am not the woman you fall in love with. I'm not the girl you want to spend hours just watching her , the girl that you try to make smile her, the girl whose hands who are intertwined with your hands. I am not that girl, so beautiful, so delicate, that makes you want to fight the world for her.

I'm not that woman that you have to protect, because I'm not fragile enough to break anything. I am hardened, and I have battle scars that perhaps maybe same to are like his. I am not ashamed of the marks, stains and bruises that you find in my soul, they are mine and are part of my story. I will not walk behind you, I'll walk with you. I'm going to push you as much as I push myself.

This makes me a difficult person to love, because sometimes you will have to give in and it will cost you. Maybe you go just because you found want a girl that makes you happy instead of one that makes you think.

I'm not that woman you fall in love with, I am that woman that you learn to love.

Hope my corrections help. 

Peace

Alasdair

Help me i need to improve my english

Hi I finished my studies at the bussines university and i need to improve my english. I wish to travel around the world , but my poor level of english don't let me will hinder my ability to travel. Please Help me.

Hope my corrections help.

Peace

Alasdair

Point of view

I am so happy that I have found find this site. I think I will enjoy it. I live in Cairo, the capital of Egypt. It is a very crowded city. I like traveling and touring and I've been to many countries in the world, for example; France, Spain, Malizya, Dubai and Saudi Arabia.

Hope my corrections help.

Peace

Alasdair

Introducing myself

Hi there!

I am from Chile and I'm 32. I am very interested in improving my English, learning more vocabulary, and improving my pronunciation. and I really want to be fluent!!!! I am good at cooking, love going to the movies and I really enjoy singing. I don't know if I am good at singing but I am doing my best. I have been teaching Spanish in my city so if you want to practice, just feel free to contact me. =)

See you around,

Best,

Hope my corrections help.

Peace

Alasdair

First!

Hello, I am studying English and German, I am pretty much good on at English but I would love to practice my pronunciation. On the other hand, I am such a terrible on at learning German so I hope someone can give me a hand and so do I.

I hope my corrections help, I can help you with your English pronouciation if you would like. Otherwise good luck with the German ;)

Peace

Alasdair

São João del Rei - Challenge one text every day

A friend gived gave me the idea to talk about my home city.
Well, I live at in a small town in Brazil. It's located at in Minas Gerais (in my opinion - best state to live on in Brazil.)
Why you should you visit São João del Rei?
Here This is a magical place, where people are always nice to you.
If you are catholic, it is a good place to be. There's are many beautifull churches here. If you are not, it is also a good place (it doesn't matter) , because the churches are really beautifull and always you can always find a little bar in front of them, with very cold beer! =)
Well... We have the "picole do Amado"; the best ice-cream ever! You can take a train (not any train, a Maria Fumaça ^^) to go to Tiradentes (another beautiful town, near São João del Rei).
But you have to be carefull asking about the train. This is a problematic word here in Minas... Well... Train is everything but certainly NOT a type of transportation way. Let me explain better: We use the word "train" to every for anythings that we can't remember the name of. Like, if you need a pen, and it is next to a friend, you tell to him: "Give me this that train there, please.". hahaha

Hope my corrections help, your town sounds lovely. Already I want to go to São João del Rei and get some picole do Amado, and sit outside a church with a nice cold beer. Beaut!

Peace

Alasdair