Shopping with my best friend!!!

Today I went shopping today with my best friend. It was very cold outside. When we left home there was some sun and it was a little warm, too. But as soon we started shopping, there was no more sun and fog appeared. Firstly, I bought one top for myself. Later(instead of "later" you can also say "afterwards), I bought one suit and a cardigan for my mother. After that we were on our way to home but we stopped to eat some street food. It was fun to eat street food in the freezing weather. After having food("having food" sounds a little awkward here. You can write "After we were done eating" instead.) we went to my aunt's place. Lastly("lastly is a little awkward here. You can say "Afterwards" instead), I dropped my friend off at her place. She asked me to come home inside, meet her mom and then leave. But I refused because it was very cold outside and I was shivering in this cold. So(instead of "so" you can write "therefore" or "instead"), I decided to see her mom later and then left for my to go/to make my way home. I reached home my house at around 5. I thought thinking that it was a wonderful day spent with my best friend after so long.

Una animale-Mia animale favorita Il mio animale preferito

Ciao tutti! Come state?

L'anno scorso, sono andata a San Diego, in California. A San Diego, il temp e faceva molto caldo. C'era il sole e molto persone (c'era tanta gente). A San Diego, ho fatto un viaggo a Sea World. A Sea World, ho nuotato con mia il mio animale favorite preferito. Ho nuotano con un dolfine delfino, ma l'acqua era fredda.

Das Ende des Semesters!

Endlich bin ich mit meinem Semester fertig! Er Es was ganz schwierig und leider ziemlich langweilig. Ich studiere Musikerziehungswissenschaft und deshalb muss ich normalweise nicht SO viel schreiben. Dieses Semester hatte ich eine Professorin, die viele Forschung macht und sie hat uns viele schreiben schriftliche Aufgaben gegeben. Sie ist aber keine gute Lehrerin und keine gute Musikerin. Alles war mit ihr <em>total Unsinn </em>(was meinst du damit?). Ich habe auch viele Probleme mit meinem letzten Konzert gehabt. Es war einfach kein guter Semester und ich bin ganz froh, fertig damit zu sein!

Weil ich mit meinem Semester fertig bin, habe ich mehr zeit um Mozart Flötenkonzerten zu spielen und Deutsch zu üben. Ich bin total begeistert! Diesen Sontag spiele ich zusammen mit meinen Freunden einen Weihnachtskonzert. Wir spielen nur schöne und einfache Weihnachtsmusik in einer Kirche. Es wird Spaß machen. In ein paar Monaten spielen wir vielleicht einen weiteres Konzert mit Klassischer Musik aus der ganzen Welt. Natürlich ist es eine Möglichkeit Bach zu spielen. Man kann sicher sagen, <em>dass er aus der Welt kam</em>(was meinst du damit?)! Außerdem hat er viele klassische Traditionen gegründet. Ich sollte auch etwas Französisches auch spielen, denn ich spiele selten Französische Flötenmusik.

Am 28. Dezember fliege ich wieder nach Deutschland um einen Freund von mir zu besuchen. Er wohnt in Berlin aber wir werden reisen zusammen nach Salzburg reisen(daher spiele ich jetzt Mozart!) und auch nach München. Ich freue mich darauf! Er ist so ein guter Freund und es wird toll sein, Zeit zusammen Zeit zu verbringen haben. Währenddem ich in Europa für zwei Wochen in Europa bin, versuche ich kein (oder wenig) Englisch zu sprechen. Drück mir die Daumen!

Hallo Michael, ich drücke dir die Daumen :-) Du sprichst/schreibst sehr gutes Deutsch! Gut gemacht! Ich wünsche dir viel Spaß in Deutschland und Salzburg, und viel Glück für dein Konzert!

chinese cuisine

This time i want to write about chinese cuisine. Many people are fans of chinese cuisine. Gastronmy is considered to be not noly as a only a skill but also an art. Exqusitely prepared chinese food has is both delicious and beautiful. The techniques and ingredients vary from place to place in China. But  all excellent chefs is shares have one thing in common. one They always take a consideration of color, taste, flavor and nutritional value into consideration. SinceThis is because food is of extreme great importance to people's health. A good chef always has a balance of grains, meat and vegetables. Thus, Chinese food thus is both tasty and healthy. Do you like chinese chinese food?*^_^*

Hi Mavis! Great job! Make sure that after punctuation (commas and periods) you leave a space before writing the next word or starting the next sentence. And I do like chinese food! It really is tasty :-)

Worüber sprechen die Männer. Ein Zitat aus dem Film.

Zum Beispiel sie fragt sie mich etwas. Ich denke, dass es wirklich sehr wichtig für ihr sie ist. Ich fange damit an, ihre Frage zu beantworten. Aber sie ist schon fertig. Sie ist schon weggegangen. Also... Eine Frage zu stellen war für sie wichtig für ihr, aber nicht mein Antwort nicht!

At During secondary school, I had an active stand in a very active life. I have participated in different educational events, wrote for a wall newspaper and<em> took out a subscription for a</em> <em>magazine </em>(what do you mean by this?). I was particularly interested in information security, scientific discoveries and applied mathematics. BesidesIn addition, I used to swim, took part in competitions, I and was even awarded with medals. I also loved to play chess, backgammon and domino. <em>In different ages I was reading different books but of all ages</em> (what do you mean by this?) my favorite ones are “A Brief History of Time” by Stephen Hawking and “The Lord of the Rings” by John Ronald Reuel Tolkien. 

I have many useful skills such as inventivenesscreativity, perseverance, stress resistance to stress, educabilityand I am a fast learner. Also I easily I also get on well with other people. <em>Every characteristic demonstrated itself</em>(what do you mean by this?) and made me the way I am right now.
Thinking When I think about what I am going to do in the future, I see myself as a successful leader of a small company which is producing produces different kinds of automatic machines such as robots and smart homes and so on. In the near future I am planning to go on a big journey around China, visiting world tp visit the well-known touristic sights, for example such as: The Great Wall, Terracotta Army, Temple of Heaven, Forbidden City, Du Fu's Thatched Cottage, The Summer Palace, The Old Summer Palace, Wanping Fortress, The Zhaojun Tomb, The Bell of Good Luck and The Stone City. In addition, I would like to try working in for a Chinese Software Developing Company or an Advancing Technology Company in order to gain experience. One of The most important things for me are self-fulfilment, <em>comfortable</em> company(This is a bit awkward. You could say "good company" or "close friends" or "friends") and family.
I would like to have an opportunity to study at your University. And of course I will do everything required from me and if selected, I am confident that you will not be disappointed.

Hi! Great start, but you need some more work on this essay before you send it to a University. What was the prompt for this essay?

Should University Students be required to Attend Classes?

The presence of the internet has affected the education sector significantly. Many of universities nowadays offer online classes for their students as an option to help them study. But still However, they still maintain the traditional system of studying. which isNamely, offline classes that require students to attend classes on at a certain time and place. The question then begin to arise is, should students be required to physically attend classes or the can should they (or: is it sufficient for them to) just apply for online classes? Even though there are online classes available at a university, there are a few reasons that as to why people still have to attend offline classes.

First of all, offline classes teach students to be responsible of their duty. Attending classes requires students to get up early in the morning and go to campus on time, because if they are late they cannot enter the class and will be marked considered as absent. This A high number of absences can negatively affect will be accumulated and will no doubt affect to their final grade.

Classes also help students to interact with their fellow students, either in a discussion or in a conversation. These kinds of interactions will develop their social life and also keep them updated with on the latest issues or news that they might not have known before.

Last but not least, classes facilitate(you can also say "allow" instead of "facilitate") students to meet the professor of a certain subject that they learn about. Students may ask the professor about the subject and gain more a higher understanding aboutof it. They can have a face to face conversation which is much easier than compared to using online chatting. Students can also easily get samples(what do you mean by samples?) or additional materials from the professor.

In short, the advantages of physically going to classes far outweigh that those of attending online classes. Students can develop themselves in many aspects by going to classes. They can learn to be responsible, build their social interactions with friends, and gain more a better understanding of their suject by interacting directly with the professor.