Could you please correct my entry? It's the third time that I publish it on italki. Thank you!

The apartment is exactly like you can see in the photos published on the website.
Before I arrived I asked for a second key, because we were two people and our schedules are completely different. XXXX told me that this was not possible. For me this is problematic because I was always depending on the other person. Once I waited at the street to enter to the house for one hour.
I didn’t meet XXXX. Someone came to give us the keys and and showed us the apartment. At the end the same thing occurred. He informed me that he was at Warsaw during my stay in the middle of the first week. Because of that, I think that probably some misunderstandings occurred concerning the check-in and check-out times. XXXXX was the mediator between the other person and us. I think that this probably wouldn't have happened if a direct contact was established.
One of the best characteristics of the apartment is the view. It has an amazing view of the Palace of yyyyyyyy, one of the emblematic buildings of the city. It is also in a walking distance of the most important places in the city: the main train station, the old town or the YYYY street.

Little review of the book Radical, by David Platt

This is my review about a really good book I read some months ago. I made it at first as practice for my English class.  

Radical, by David Platt

This is quite an interesting and challenging book for all those who think about of themselves as being Christian people (and in here, I'm not talking about religion at all, but the honesty aim to follow Jesus of Nazareth teachings). <--You need to clarify this previous sentence. It is a book where the author, David Platt, makes an effort to us to figure out if our life is going according our speech. It is to say, it's not your words what show who you are, but is your life itself, how do you behave, what you are looking for, what is the most important thing in the life for you.

So, in fact, I think that many people of those who read this book, could see the difference between our daily lives and what the bible says it should be. So, many of us are so worry about "success", achieving a good job and stuff (not necessary bad things, in fact) in this short time in the earth, that forget the true important things, about our Creator, his love, and the needing we have for knowing Him, without human religion. Then you realize that you are not the only one who needs God's love. There are so many people in the world needing that you show it and live it.

I think that is a great book, and although it could do nothing in you by itself, it is really worth it to read it.

I hope this helps, but you are in good shape! -Veronica

Unit 9 - Exercise 1

2- Carol is opening her lunchbox.
3- You're drinkring your milk.
4- Did they talk to their teacher?
5- I'm doing my homework in my room.
6- Is Tom wearing his hat and his (it isn't necessary to repeat this) coat?
7- I turned off my light.
8- Are you using your notebook?
9- Are Tom and Carol studying in their room?
10- Ann walked to her car.

You're doing awesome! -Veronica

About Me

My name is Mustafa Gamal.  and I am a fresh graduate  I was born and raised in Mansoura, Egypt. Even though I am a fresh recent graduate from ZAGAZIG University. Even though my major was Agriculture, my interest lie in administration or logistics.

I am single and have not been married. I have a small family but they are very supportive of me. My town is small so the number of activities are limited but my hobbies include hanging out with friends, football and watching tv.

Hope this is helpful! Goodluck! -Veronica