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hello there~~ I am a college student in China (actually I'm already one junior. Oh how time flies!). I'm an English major, so I think italki will be the best place for me to polish my English up. And if you have any questions in learning Chinese (maybe Japanese also, I'll try) please fell free to contact me.
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    你好!写的不错!我修改了几处以供参考:

     

    小文的脑中(闹钟)早晨六点就响了,他得起床了。他七点在家里吃早餐,吃完了以后去跑步。 他一边听音乐,一边跑步;但是天突然开始下雨了。他回家的时候电话响了,他刚(赶gan)快去接电话,但是他全身都湿掉了,地上也有水,(应该是:他全身都湿透了,有好多水滴到了地板上,他不小心踩到了水,然后滑倒了。) 而且他没有看到睡在地上的猫,因此他不小心踩到了,吓坏了猫。坐在地上的可怜的小文(中文里,习惯把很长的一段定语另分成一句,即,可怜的小文坐在地板上,)忠(终)于接到电话了,但是已经太晚了,都没有人在电话里了。(对方已经挂断了)

     

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    November 30, 2014
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    November 29, 2014
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    Nanshan case in Chinese greenfield investment a translation homework, please help check it~~ I just want to know whether there are many mistakes or awkward expressions…you know, Chinese students all master in using Chinglish n late 2012, a $160 million, 600,000-square-foot aluminum extrusion manufactory was put into operation in Lafayette, Indiana. The factory belongs to a Chinese company: Nanshan Group. This programme, from building to operating taking about two years and a half, is the first greenfield investment(GI) in the US from Chinese metal companies. Nanshan takes the investment a strategic move rather than just a quick money-maker. The program finally settled in Indiana in the centre of America, which is quite active in attracting foreign capital. Similarly, a group of traditional big manufacturing states now are also sparing spare no effort to win Asian capital. To this extent, Nanshan’s case provides a good view of Chinese GI in the US. Obviously, GI is simpler than M&A, while Chinese investments in the US tend to be (in the form of) M&A recently. Disputes arising from mergers with Chinese companies can be avoided in GI, as the latter concerns the local people, the factories, assets, and more fundamentally, jobs. These are tangible benefits to the community. But GI also has its own challenges. Nanshan soon realised that, even after the company has settled down and created jobs and built new factories, it should continue to learn, and to learn fast. Because after investing, it should get accustomed to the US market and then start competing. Nanshan is such a company—go to learn something before expect anything. Firstly, it was forced to learn how to compete in a market with top technology. Secondly, it realised that a deep pocket itself can’t bring a company success. Lastly but maybe most importantly, it has not gained experience only on technology, but also on administration and human resources from the US. And these interwoven experience and lessons have formed a feedback loop, and finally have had influence on its parent company’s managing, operating and training back in China.
    November 28, 2014
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