Help me to correct this script of english drama (2)

SCENE 6
In the taxation class
Lecturer (Miss Nadia) : “Good Morning class,
All student : “Morning Miss”
Lecturer : “How are you today?”
All student : “Fine, thanks miss, how about you?”
Lecturer : “I’m very well, thanks. Ok class, today We are going to learn about the taxation’s system in Indonesia. But before that, let us pray first. Will the chairman please to lead us to in prayer”
Daus (chairman) : “Attention. Okay guys, before we start to study, let's pray together, <em>praying begins</em>... <em>finish</em>es”
Lecturer : “Okay class, do you know what kind of taxation system is in Indonesia? Please rise raise your hand! Okay Daus, please..”
Daus : “the taxation system of Indonesia is a self assessment system miss.”
Lecturer : “Good. That’s true. Okay then, who can explain to us, the definition of the self assessment system? Except besides Daus!”
Lecturer : “Rahma? Can you explain it to us?”
Rahma : “No miss”
Lecturer : “what about you, Nurul?”
Nurul : “hehehe, I don’t know miss”
Lecturer : “okay, so Rijal please explain it to us”
Rijal : “hmm according to me, the self assessment system is a system that where we have to counting our taxes by our self and… “
Egi : “tok.. tok..” (we would be more likely to say "knock knock")
Lecturer : “Yes, come in..”
Egi : “I’m sorry Miss, is this a taxation class?”
Lecturer : “yes, this is the taxation class, do you need some help?”
Egi : “hmm No miss, I’m a new student of taxation miss.”
Lecturer : “so, what time is it now?”
Egi : “8.15 AM I’m sorry for coming late miss.”
Lecturer : “why do you came late?”
Egi : “ I didn’t know where the taxation class is was”
Lecturer : “Okay, no problem. So, because you are a new student here, please introduce yourself!”
Egi : “thank you miss, hmm Good morning guys.. let me introduce my self. My name is Egidya Vita Pertiwi. You can call me Egi. I’m from Bone but I have lived in Makassar for four years. I live in Daya. I went to senior high school at 5 Makassar. Any questions?
Daus : “do you have a boyfriend?”
All student : “cieeee Daus..”
Daus : “how about a phone number?
Rijal : “husstt don’t disturb her, I think she is my old friend”
Daus : “Really?”
Lecturer : “okay Daus, I think u can ask Egi later about it. Okay Egi, thank you, you can sit down now. We will continue our lesson”
Egi : “thank you Miss”

My favorite reads books

Today I received my new book which I bought online shopping three days from now. ago called ”A BRIEF HISTORY OF HISTORY” wrote by Hawking. There are many beautiful pictures in the book and interesting stories in the book. I read “Foundation” wrote by Asimov before, and I read “Prelude to Foundation” before. Maybe in some many years later, we can drive fly aircrafts into the galaxy, then we can sightseeing see the planets and camping in it on them. Maybe we will also find extraterrestrials. we let We may find that the universe is peaceful, extraterrestrials are very hospitable，they let us may invited us into their home, we may see many a lot of strange furniture in their house，they might cook delicious food for us，either they are good at cooking or they have recipes.
I will read this book after I finished "Prelude to Foundation." I will share these books for with you，you must be fall in love with it them too.

P.S. If you have favorite reads, books you can recommend them to me^ ^

A lot of the time I was not exactly sure what you were trying to say, so I just guessed. Hope this helps!

As a matter of fact, I don’t even like writing in Chinese

As a matter of fact, I don’t even like writing in Chinese. But when I wrote an article on italki for the first time and I found someone who helped me corrected my grammar mistakes I was pleasantly surprised. As a Chinese proverb says, ‘化腐朽为神奇 (turn the foul and rotten into the rare and ethereal -- turn bad into good; make the ugly beautiful; make use of discarded things; transform the corruptible into mysterious life) ‘ , and my poor composition had become fluent. This is very amazing. Lookers-on onlookers see more than players. I can nerve never find out my own mistakes without other's help. Now I have more motivation to write articles in English on italki because I can find out my mistakes here and make progress.


Once again, thank you for correcting my grammar mistakes. :）

About my study method.

I just read some article about learning a foriengn language. It was very useful.
In the article, the largest rate at most popular way to learning a language is to memorize vocabulary. I agree to with this point. So many Most people who learn another language just memorize words.

But.., this process is so very boring to me. I feel like being a machine when I just do memorization. So, recently I started to read the a book writed written in English. (I'm not exactly sure what you mean here so I am going to guess) I also watched the a movie, drama without subtitles. This way is demands quite some time, but it is so interesting!

I wish hope that I can speak and writing fluencely write fluently soon.

Thank you for read my writing.

A fisherman

I have a friend who is very interested in fishing greatly. As a fisherman, he is unlucky. Instead of fish, he often catches old boots and rubbish. After having spent spending the whole morning on the river, he always go comes home with an empty bag. "You must give up fishing," I advise him. "It's a waste of time." "This doesn't really worry me," he always says. "I'm not really interested in fishing., I'm just interested in sitting in a boat and doing nothing."