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My essay to rewrite a story
A shepherd once found a young wolf, He took it in and taught it to steal lambs from the flocks nearby. The wolf, admiring himself, said to his owner " Since you have taught me, you should keep an eye on your flocks or you will lose them too " .
When - suggests at an actual time in the story because he has become an 'apt pupil' (good student) he says 'since' which is also like 'because' or 'considering' he says taught because it's in the past. I think..It's better to say keep 'an eye' out in this case. 'Your flocks' suggests they are already his so you don't need to say 'your own'.
0 votedNovember 13, 20141- Fisch Ich habe zwei Fische. Ein Fisch ist weiblich und die anderer männliche. Die Fische waren von einen Shop gekauft worden. Ein bisschen Wasser von Tank wird von mir jede Woche gewechselt (passive?). Im mitte des Tanks steht eine eine kleine Version des Eiffelturms. Die beide sind Orange. :)November 13, 201440
Grammar
1) If I were you I'd go (there) by train.
2) He would've bought a piano last year but he didn't have enough money at the time.
3) We would send a parcel now but the post office is already closed.
4) They would go to the cinema this evening but they need to prepare for an exam.
5) I am sure that my brother could help me repair the flat.
6) If not for you, we would lose. (If it weren't for you, we would have lost)
7) If it wasn't raining, children would go to the river.Number 7) is correct but are you talking about children in general?
If it wasn't raining, there would be children at the river.
If it wasn't raining, the children would go to the river.
If it wasn't raining, children would be at the river.
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