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Ich möchte mein ungeübtes Deutsch entrosten und jemandem helfen, Englisch zu lernen. Ich bin qualifizierte Lehrerin für Englisch als Fremdsprache und möchte ab Januar ein halbes Jahr in Deutschland verbringen und arbeiten. Studio italiano da tre mesi (in internet, da sola), e voglio parlare con italiani. Vi posso aiutare con l'inglese perché sono qualificata come insegnante di inglese. Mi sono laureata quest'anno in musicologia.
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    The educational problems of Spain. Problems in Spain's education system/the Spanish education system would be more idiomatic.

    Hello,

    I want to explain some things about some problems in the education of mu country 'explain some things' is a bit colloquial. You could say 'I want to try to explain the problems with the education system in my country, Spain'. As you know, I'm a primary teacher, since the last year I've been a primary school teacher for a year, but I'm not working in a school yet/at the moment.

    The biggest problem is that our politics politicians (no comma) don't believe in us. I mean that they invest very little money in our educational system, which means that we don't have enough teachers in the schools, we have a very low salary, with an excess of students by class with too many students in each class OR class sizes are too big, etc. But..this is not the only problem...these things...have very bad consequences: we can't assist to students as they need we can't give students the help they need. If we have 27 students in the class, we can't do individual work with them/we can't help them individually. And all of our students need help in some specific things.

    But well, what can we do? We only can hard working can only work hard to try to do the best we can with our resources. And, of course, we have to fight with everybody to be recognized. Do you mean 'everybody has to join in the fight if this problem is to be recognised'?

    The teachers are very important in all of societies, and it's the first step to be better. Do you mean 'improving teaching is the first step to improving a society'?

    As say MALALA Yousafzai: As Malala Yousafzai says:

    ONE CHILD, ONE TEACHER, ONE BOOK, AND ONE PEN CAN CHANGE THE WORLD.

     

    I hope this helps!

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    November 16, 2014
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    Travel by train in Europe

    Last summer, I travelled by train in Europe with friends. It was a great adventure.
    We went to Italia, Croatia, Greece, Slovenia...

    I'd say 'I travelled around Europe by train with friends. 'Around' gives the sense that it's for fun. So for the title I might say 'Travelling around Europe by train'. We also talk about 'interrailing' in (UK) English for this activity, because the train ticket is called an Interrail pass, at least in English.

    In Italia Italy, we visited a lot of museums, including the Vatican Museum 'including' is less formal than 'such as', and you need an article. In other countries, It was more festive especially in Crotia I might say 'other countries had more of a festival atmosphere'. Parties are really great. We met a lot of foreigners from all around the world. Instead of language barrier, we felt the approach with others was much easier than in France. This makes sense but isn't idiomatic. I'd say 'Instead of [or rather than] being inhibited by language barriers, we found it much easier to approach others than in France.'

    My favorite country was Slovenia. People were so nice...and the landscape was just amazing. I swam in the well-known bled lake Lake Bled.

    The return to Paris was difficult even if I love this place... I liked that felling feeling of moving being on the move OR moving from place to place.

     

    I hope this isn't too late, and that it helps! The corrections are mainly just making your English more idiomatic, rather than because there are rules you aren't following. 

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    November 16, 2014
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    How do you like to spend a day off?

    I am off today. I am having a day off today OR I am off work today.
    It was a peaceful day.
    No work hard No hard work OR I didn't have to work hard, just spend freely free time.
    Reading books with a cup of coffee and favorite music after the swimming.

    I love spending time with my friends, but sometimes I need some quiet time for me, to recharge my batteries.
    I could energy charge :)

    So, How do you like to spend a day off?

     

    Good luck with your future learning! You could improve your writing by connecting your ideas into longer sentences, such as: It was a peaceful day, without any hard work, only free time.

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    November 12, 2014
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