12월30일 sentence practice

1. 저는 영어와 인도네시아 어를 잘 하려고 노력중이에요.
I'm trying to speak English and Bahasa Indonesian well.

2. 영국에 놀러가면 뭘 먹어봐야 해요?
What should I try if I go to England?

3. 당신은 어느분야에 재능이 있어요?
What field do you think you are gifted in?

4. 나는 운동에 재능이 있어요.
I think I am gifted in excercise.

5. 사무실에서 일하는게 잘 맞지 않아요.
I'm not cut out for working in an office and sitting at the a desk all day.

6. 당신은 장거리 연애를 찬성하나요?
Are you in favor of a long distance realtionship?

7. 애당초에 걔를 믿지 말았어야 했어.
We shouldn't have trusted her to begin with.

8. 네가 원하면, 내가 가게 갔다올게.
If you want, I could run to the store.

9. 걱정할 필요 없어.
There's no need to worry.

10. 지난주 내내 숙제 할 시간이 없었어요.
There was no I did not have time to do homework over the past week.

I have yogurt for dessert

I have made many mistakes by using the word I often make a mistake when writing the word 'dessert' and 'desert'.
Just before a minute I need to search a dictionary
to I just tried to find a dictionary to write a glass of 'Dessert'ㅜㅅㅠ
But Even last week I even used the word when I wrote some words.(I used the dictionary at that time too.)
I guessed I have an eraser in my headㅜㅅㅠ

나는 '디저트'와 '사막'이란 단어를 쓸 때 자주 실수합니다.
방금 잔에도 '디저트'를 쓰기 위해 사전을 찾아야했어요.ㅜㅅㅠ
심지어 저번주에도 썼던 단어 인데(그 때도 사전을 찾아야 했다)
내 머리 속에 지우개가 있나봐요ㅜㅅㅠ

Don't forget to add a space after each sentence. 

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I was thinking of what the Pope's visit meant to Korea which is the onlydivided nation and and how he would address the issue relating to the undergoing unfinished Sewol ship disaster. He was invited from by the Korean President. This made it so his first visit. The last time a Pope visited was for the first time in 25 years ago.

He is As the symbol of the Roman Catholic Church and also the symbol of peace and reconciliation, a lot of Koreans expected that he would gives the a message to us regarding the disaster; even though even if the visit purpose was to be for religious reasons. 

First, The pope Francis offered his condolences to a bereaved family of suffering from the Sewol ship disaster. and He then consoled other people that also were suffering. In addition, one of them was even baptized by the Pope Francis.

Lee Ho-jin was his name. He was the first Korean to be baptized by the Pope during this visit. He then took Francis as his baptismal name with that name.

But on the other side hand, ironically, the truth committee of Sewol ship held a rally in the square of Seoul Cityhall to demand an indictment power and an investigation power of special law on August 15th. This was the same time Pope came to visit.
 
However, the scheduling conflicted each other.,so The Pope's visit attracted more public attention than the rally. Also mnay A contributing factor might have been due to the TV stations were broadcasting Pope Francis' visit in stead of the rally that.  Therefore They people from the rally might have felt feel alienated from public attention. It seems like hes the Pope's visit was used politically even though his intention wasn't meant like that for other reasons.