Would you like to help for me with great correction for the my short essay? The domain name servers of GB Bank were working in their own data center. I implemented a new domain name server which is located on the cloud. During that implementation, I got a failure related to some dns records of the yahoo server. Some customers of the bank could not send email to GB Bank using the Yahoo email. Those emails are very critical and hurried because those people are employee's sending salary information. That condition was very tricky, almost all of them calling over the phone and telling our employees about the salary of this month. I have created users for those users on a shared server and suggest they upload on it. Then I received those data and passed all of them to the accountant of the bank. then the problem is solved. Also I fixed the wrong dns record.

Please everyone, I need right correction to fix following the sentences It’s created by “Bilguun” who graduated from Harvard university to help to others who are learning English by any way like me and to describe the way How to get great Scholarship from great universities of United state. It’s created by Zolbayar who works from Mongolia to foreign company through remote work. So His learning method and the tip was very amazing and useful

Human being, I needed correction, Pls help me kind people As my view, Human being is completely different compare with other animals which lives on the earth. Because, The brain of human is much developed for long time period than others, and creating more identifies and successful things based on the advance. For example: in last few decades, Human beings doing amazing things using information technology and solving very difficult problems that on one else on earth can, and leading of future of earth. However, Somethings of those are affecting as wrong way for the nature and influence of it is coming back to us through strange decease and awful climate change.

これは　わたしの　はじめて　書きものです。 私の住んでいる　場所にとても　熱くなりました。のれから　わたしは　あのなつきせつ　来ていると　おもうています。わたしは　外に　友達と　遊びたいと　おもうています。でも　あの　コロナウイルスが　広がっているので　うちで　いることは　いいですと　考えて　います。