A day in my life

Usually my day starts at 5:00 a.m. I wake up before my dad so I take my dog with her blanket and we go to my dad's bedroom and I put her there. She doesn't like to wake up if it's dark outside.
I do make my bed and prepare everything to take the a shower. After my shower I go downstairs and I make the coffee. While the coffee brews, i ready I start doing my make up (we must use make up to be in the class). Then I have my breakfast, I clean the kitchen and I go upstairs to get ready. I have to wear and a uniform so it's easy for me I don't have to think what I should wear that day. Then I do my hair and put everything I need in my bag and I put the bag on the motorcycle.
I'm on my way to classes at by 6:30 a.m. My class starts at 8:00 a.m I'm at the airport at 7:30 a.m (the school is in the airport). We can't be late or they won't open the door once is closed. If we are late three times that means we are marked one day absent.
We finish at 11:00 am and then I go to the restaurant to get order my lunch. At 11:30 a.m I'm on my way to my job. I'm at work at 12:20 p.m and I start working at 2:00 p.m. I take the advantage of studying that time by studying and I prepare for any question the teacher can ask. I'm out of done with my job at 9:00 p.m and I'm at home at by 9:30 p.m.  I prepare make coffee and go outside with my dog then I drink some coffee and go to sleep. Sometimes I wait for my parents to talk tell me about how the their day was. When I'm too tired I just go to bed and I send them a text saying that  asking them to please wake me up when they are at get home. I go to bed at 11:00 p.m (early?) maybe because I have to prepare everything for the next day.
This is a normal day in my life. On weekends I do all the chores and payments pay the bills I couldn't do on weekdays.
Thank you for any correction you could give me. :)

FOREIGN LANGUAGE LEARNING IN MY COUNTRY

FOREIGN LANGUAGE LEARNING IN MY COUNTRY

Introduction

The present This report is aimed at analysing to analyze the state use of foreign language learning in my country. In order to do so [in order to do what?], I will firstly deal with discuss the main languages people learn, secondly then I will focus on who learns them and where.  and Finally, I will make some recommendations for improving language learning in Spain.

Which languages do people learn?

There is no doubt that English is the main target foreign language for Spanish people speakers, [not simply "Spanish people" but those specifically who speak Spanish, so "Spanish speakers"] together with other less demanded popular foreign languages such as French or Italian. Nevertheless, due to the severe economic crisis the our country is undergoing, as well as the emigration movements from Spain to other European countries with that have fewer lesser rates of unemployment such as Germany, some young people and adults are getting fairly interested in learning German too.

Who learns them foreign languages and where? ["them" is too vague]

Regarding English is taught as a compulsory subject throughout most of the levels of the Educative Educational System.  It is learnt learned by very young children at pre-primary school to young students at High School. [Possible alternative: <em>It is studied all the way from pre-primary school to high school.</em>"] As with any another foreign language, such as Italian, French or German, it can also be learnt learned as well in the Official Language Schools, which is only accessible for to <em>young and adult people</em>. [who else is there?] In the last few years, Thanks to the distance learning through the Internet, lately there has been  an increasingly important significant number of people that is are learning languages comfortably at home in an autodidactic way. [Maybe I am simple, but I am a native English speaker and I don't even know what autodidactic means. Could you just say "are learning new languages comfortably at home"?]

Recommendations

I strongly recommend the promotion of bilingual programs in the public schools on the part of the educational authorities as well as official exchanges of students from different countries of the E.U. [?? Not sure what this sentence means.] It would be also great, The creation of bilingual libraries by the local administrations would also be good.  , the rising of Raising grants for those people who want to study a language at home by <em>on their own</em> [redundant, however, since "at home" and "on their own" mean virtually the same thing] or the broadcasting  of foreign series and TV programmes in original version with subtitles [what about it? incomplete thought...]

Planning my Winter Break

This week, I've been planning my winter break. I'm going to visit Medellin and Cartagena with an American F friend whom I met on the internet. [Good one! Most English speakers don't even understand how to use "whom"!] He and his family are coming to Colombia the first week of January. I have never been to Cartagena before. It's the most touristy city in Colombia, but I have not heard good comments about this city apart from its beautiful downtown.
In December I'll be studying German as much as I can. I want to be at the A2 level in German by January of next year. I was gifted given a book [much less formal] for my birthday titled "Assimil German With Ease". I highly recommend it to study for studying German. Regarding my bad English, I will try to improve it next year. I'm still ashamed to speak in English to a foreigner. It's a problem because I'm also already shy in Spanish, and but when it comes to speaking in a foreign language I'm even more shier shy. ["Shier" isn't a word.]

grammar of english

hello...I will want know how can differentiate the verbs regular and irregular?

 

¡Esa es una pregunta grande! Que los verbos?