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Hello, I'm Xiaowei/孝玮/효위 from Singapore. I'm a freshman in university, majoring in Accounting and Finance. I'm trying to learn Korean and I can help you with English and Chinese. Let's be friends and help each other in learning new languages! :) Have a great day! 뿅~ ^^
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    How can I handle my stress?

    Today's the weather is just picture perfect, but deep down I'm in the feeling blue. 
    Because entering a great reputable company is too hard and my university is quite far from my place house. It takes about 2hours to travel. Anyway.., I want to get a great job as soon as possible. However, these days I'm got getting a lots of stress from those things concerns.. What am should I going to do? Any suggestions?

    오늘 날씨는 참 좋다 근데 나는 우울해 왜냐면 좋은 회사에 입사하는게 너무 어렵기 때문이야 그리고 내가 다니는 대학교는 우리집에서 꽤 멀어 약 2시간 정도 걸려. 어쨌든 나는 가능한 빨리 좋은 직업을 얻고싶어. 근데 요즘 이것들 때문에 스트레스를 많이 받아. 내가 뭘 해야하지? 좋은 제안이 있어?


    one more thing, if someone can offer better wording or notices any mistakes. please share :)

     

    Comment:

    I can really feel the angst in your writing. Your English is pretty good but I realised that your train of thoughts is a little messy (probably because you're stressed out with all your concerns haha).

    The main idea of your post is about your concern with employment but in the midst of it, you digressed and brought in your problem with the long traveling time to school. I think your writing could be greatly improved if you work on your sentence structures and make use of conjunctions to link the flow of your idea clearly.

    I don't think I'm able to give you any advice for your worries since I have never experienced such concerns. I sincerely hope that things will turn out well for you eventually. 힘내세요! :)

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    October 17, 2014
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