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Hello,my friends,I am a student in Shanghai,China, and i am currently trying to improve my Francais. My native language is Mandrine and i am also good at English. If you wanna to learn Chinese, let's be friends.
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    一点废话。A bit of nonsense.

    I am going to tell a story. Because I want to practice .
    我要讲一个故事。因为我想练习。
    So then, in my opinion, it is better to live in a nation where people are polite, and there is freedom and toilets.
    所以。 我的想法是 最好是居住一个国家,那里的人们有礼貌,那里有自由和洗手间。
    Also where they do not need parachutes or mosquito nets.
    而且 他们不需要降落伞,或 蚊帐。
    Do you agree?
    你同意吗?
    It is true that today the sky was light blue and it was sunny.
    这是真的。今天的天空是 浅蓝色的, 阳光 明媚。
    Dinner was not bad.
    晚饭不错.
    I listened to music on my headset while drinking my second glass of beer.
    我用耳机听音乐当我喝第二杯啤酒的时候。 the proper sequencewould be: 当我喝第二杯啤酒的时候 我用耳机听音乐.

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    October 12, 2014
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    我想念我的网友们

    上个星期我 给我的老网友们 写电子邮件 了。我得知他们的电子信箱 死了。他们没有告诉我,他们要杀他们的电子信箱了。我 很悲痛。我 还 有他们的照片。我不知道为什么他们没写信给我。我知道在我的生命中我永远不可能再次看到他们或者写信给他们。为什么中国人不写信给他们的朋友们?两个朋友们想做我的姐姐。一个朋友是第一个在Italki写信给我的人。另外一个朋友很喜欢老爷车。两个朋友们有他们的电子信箱,但是他们不回复我的电子信件。在柏林我甚至遇到这两个朋友!我遗失六个朋友。我很想念他们俩个!

    Translation if somebody of you cannot understand my poor chinese *(^-^)*

    I miss my internet friends

    Last week I wrote E-Mails to my very old internet friends. I found out that their E-Mail addresses are dead. They didn’t tell me, that they wanted to kill their E-Mail addresses. I am very sad. I still have pictures of them. I don’t know why they haven’t written me. I know I can never see or write them again in my life. Why the Chinese do not write their friends? Two of them wanted to be my elder sisters. One of them was the first who wrote to me on Italki. One other likes old cars very much. Two of them still have their E-Mail addresses but they do not answer my E-Mails. I even met these two in Berlin! I lost six friends. I miss them all!

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    October 12, 2014
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