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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Hi,<em> (Remember to capitalize the beginning of a sentence!)</em> this <em>("this" doesn't need to be capitalized.)</em> is Shehzad from Pakistan, Karachi. I'm 23. I'm <em>(I am speak Urdu?)</em> speak Urdu as a first language and I wanna<em> (want to, "wanna" is informal)</em> learn English as a second language. I wanna want to learn English to help me improve my education better, because English has become so necessary to learn in any kind of field.

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    This Weekend

    Today is Sunday. It's sunny. <em>(You have already stated this)</em> After getting up, my little son Steven and I went out for a breakfast and some exercises. After going downstairs, I took his small bicycle out of the storage room. Steven rode his bicycle very fast on his way to Donghu Park, although his has only known how to ride a bicycle for a few days. I followed him and walked fast so that I was not left far from him and gave him some help. After a while, we arrived to the side of the destiny. First, we ate something for breakfast. Then Steven rode his small bicycle in the Donghu Park with me following him.  I found Steven had already been able to a rather good job on riding his bicycle. <em>(you already stated this as well)</em> Then I praised him for his progress. After about half an hour, we went back home.

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    October 12, 2014
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    Keep Moving

    Today is sunny. I woke up early. After a course my class <em>(the word "my" is optional)</em>, I was walking at school alone. I felt (felt is past tense of "was feeling") sadness because I will be graduating from college next year. It will be hard for me to say goodbye to my classmates and my friends. My college major is engineering management. It seems construction projects companies don't need many female employees, so it's hard for a girl to find a job. Keep learning, Keep moving..don't lose your faith...that's all, thanks..

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    October 12, 2014
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