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THE PATH TOWARD YOURSELF 2
We are afraid of being alone and we try to cover mask our loneliness ("Cover" isn't bad here, but "mask" might be better.) through fake and unhealthy relationships, through drugs, through religion, everything anything (Because you're talking about many options, but only a couple of which any single person might use.) that seems to fill the hole we have within ourselves.. but this mechanism doesn’t seem to work properly, just because (I would use "because" by itself here, but you could say something like "simply because." "Just because" doesn't feel quite right.) in all our attempts to be happy, we look for happiness outside of (You can say "outside ourselves," but it's pretty casual sounding. In general, "outside" should be followed by "of" if you're following it with a noun.) ourselves,. we We basically put our moods in the hands of others.. either a lover or a child or someone.. Can you believe that? Well, you will be endlessly disappointed sooner or later (It sounds odd to combine "endlessly" with "sooner or later" because the former suggests something that has been occurring and always will occur, while the latter suggests something that will happen once in the future.) because you are not in control of what is outside of yourself (If you just say "outside," it sounds like you're talking about not being indoors.) so you cannot be sure of what is going to happen,. that That would will ("Would" sounds odd because you're talking about something that will happen in the future.) make you anxious, and/or worried, (Your list here consists only of "anxious" and "worried." "Looking" isn't part of that list because it's not an adjective. Since you only have two items in your list, you should combine them with "and" or "or," not a comma.) restlessly looking for a security you will never have simply because it doesn’t exist. Take you risks, ALWAYS be yourself, ALWAYS ("Always" can be placed in either location, but it sounds more natural at the beginning of this clause.) because you can make all the mistakes you want and be happy if you follow your inner path,. don’t Don't be another person,; don’t waste what is your nature and your dreams,. (This last part sounds odd but I can't suggest a correction because I don't know what you mean by "wasting your nature" nor "wasting your dreams.") you You are unique, so just so simply perfect.Under my heavy and written sheet (What do you mean by "written sheet"? This sounds odd.) of old paper, I am still thirsty, empty, eagernessly eagerly ready to take a sip of life from a different flask, now.
0 votedAugust 1, 20150Les fruits.
Je vois, tu vois... nous voyons...
Le pastèque et la joie
toi et moi...
La fraise et la comtesse
toi et moi..
du marché, je te veux te parler...Contrairement à l'espagnol, le pronom objet est mis devant l'infinitif s'il y en a un, devant le verbe conjugué autrement.
0 votedJuly 31, 20151Youtube
Today I want to talk about one Spanish youtuber called Grace. She has got a channel called "Happysunnyflowers" and there she uploads videos about makeup, tips, outfist outfits, hairstyles, her family live life, halls, and recipes... (When you have a list, you should place the word "and" before the last item in the list.)
She lives in Madrid but she was born in Colombia Columbia. She lived there ("There" is vague here because you just introduced two new locations at the same time.) until she's was ("She's" is only a contraction of "she is.") 4 years and after that (You could also say "afterward(s)." "After" generally needs a noun after it.) she came to Spain. When she finished the high school (When we say something like this, we're talking about the institution of high school in general, not about a specific high school. Since it's a general thing we're talking about, we don't use an article.) she went away to Los Ángeles. There she met a man (Jacob) and now a days now ("Nowadays" suggests some habitual action or activity that isn't the way is was in the past. In this case, it's better to just say "now.") he is her husband. They have two daughters. Violetta Belle is the oldest and she's 2 years old and Allegra Rose was born on in April.
Violetta was born in California and last year they returned to Spain so her sister was born here.
I recommend you watch her videos because they (Very rarely can you leave out the subject of a verb in English.) are very funny and she is a lovely woman!
What Who ("What" suggests that people who make Youtube videos are things.) is your favourite youtuber?0 votedJuly 31, 20151- This is hard to answer because both of these words are used in many ways. In general, "to do" refers to performing an action (i.e. "I do chores" or "he does gymnastics"), whereas "to make" refers to the creation of something (i.e. "I make jewelry" or "he makes cakes"). "To do" is generally followed by a noun that refers to an activity, whereas "to make" is followed by a noun that refers to an object.0 votedJuly 30, 20150
The first article.
Je pense que c’est une langue romantique.J’espère et qu’un plus grand nombre de personnes relevant de augmentent («Relever» est pour quelque chose de physique. Par exemple, «Je relève la bouteille».) leur compétence dans les différentes langues de partage en partagant (C'est la méthode qu'on fait cette augmentation.) des connaissances acquises.Merci de pour votre ___. («Merci pour + substantif», ou «Merci de + verbe».)
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