Description of my favourite place using all five senses.

My favourite places is the are parks.
Of course I have my a favourite one, but i don't want to write about a park in particular.
I remember I loved Central Park in NYC and Hyde Park in London as well as all the other little parks that it's are easy to find everywhere.
I'm fascinated by the green grass and the flowers, especially when there are days with a warm sun and bright sky.
I love to listen to the movements of the leaves on the trees and the sound of the water dropping from a fountain. I'm not disappointed even by the voices of people who are playing or running or talking when (they) are satsitting on the benches.
I like walking on the rough lanes and sometimes I am struck touching some flowers that are blossoming in a superb way.
Furthermore it's great smelling everything : flowers, grass just cut, water in a little lake.
In springtime I often spend my lunchtime in a park and even a simple sandwich seems more tasty than ever.
But what I like most in the park it's to rest, sitting on the grass and dreaming.

personal information About me:

Hello,

My name is Wilman Carreño
I am Columbian.
I am twenty-one years old

I work as a graphic designer and web, I like to paint, draw, and play to soccer and the music.

My English is not very good, it is very very basic

I hope to meet new people, to socialize, and to improve my language

Regards,

Please, Check my essay

Although some researchers believe that a large number amount of (a) budget should (be) spent on classes and libraries, in fact, maybe they make may be making a mistake. because To improve the level of knowledge schooling, we should increase level of students’ spirit motivation. Sports and social activities are ways to do the thing this. These activities can decrease stress of among students as well as increase (the) level of their confidence. Also, the activities can prevent neurosis in the light of the fact that we argue in favor of financial support should be equal to those.
It is a reality fact that sports and social activities can relieve our stress. Stress is an element that decreases our learning capabilities.to make the level of our learning decrease. For instance, when we want to concentrate on our a tasks like writing, but we are stressed,and stress as an annoying element, (the) stress decreases our efficiencies and we can not write properly. In studies that have been recently done among one thousand volunteers, experts have seen results that (in) about 40 percent of volunteers, their stress can get worse if there are not convenient places to play. <--Please clarify
One of the main factors to increase learning is confidence. The different ways to improve this element exist. One of these ways is a sport. For example, a girl considers not to have the proper body image and due to this fact, she has a difficult time focusing on tasks. Therefore , it might be safe to say that she suffers from a lack confidence. In what ways has can she increase her confidence? Obviously, going to the gym is a solution. The otherAnother way is to attend social activities because speaking with the  interacting with friends can develop her confidence. On the other hand,<--this phrase is used to contradict an argument you are making. If you want to add on you can say: Therefore, As shown, resulting in... these methods can improve learning motivation that will have an end result in attending college.
To put it in a nutshell, the conclusion <This is repetivtive. To sum it up that can be drawn from the above discussion is that there are conditions (and factors) that a budget should be (better) spent on (such as) sport and something like  student activities/extracurriculars because these types of programs can soothe the stress and improve the confidence (among students) 

Sealing Victory

Reshaping victory conditions was the major change brought by the Player's Edition. FCRS usually ended a game whenever one of the two opponents had lost 70% of his strength. From there on, the computer would start to record any victory points held by one or the other side around the different objectives.

To avoid this abrupt termination, players are now able to carry out the game till the last turn allowed by the scenario. It's especially necessary to experience the full turns allocation after you have badly beaten up your opponent and just need to collect victory points hiding in (the) few towns behind the frontline. In multiplayer mode, from the onset, the players can overcome the sudden death (triggered when force strenght drops below 30%) by choosing to continue the game till its nominal end.

[Note : this text is a my translation of a part of a French video game review published here : http://www.histogames.com/HTML/test/flashpoint-campaigns-red-storm-player-s-edition.php]

More Comfort, More Efficiency

(Even) if the new FCRS maps are not perfect — (the) terrain elevation still lacks some visibility — they are fully functional and a lot more aesthically pleasing than the old ones. Anyway, in cases of doubt, the player can display the terrain levels (Ctrl-E).

As in the past, before going into a fight, it’s worth setting on the fog of war option and the limited staff rule, for more realism. The limited staff rule will lower the number of orders available each turn, depending on the organisational efficiency of each army. Once the battle has begun, you’ll quickly find your bearings. The first thing to do, at the very start of a game, being (is) to switch some units to ensure that everyone will stay in range of it's HQ. The player has also to give the right orders to (the) support units, (e.g) making air defense units (AD) to watch the sky ("hold" order) and helos to stay away from lethal hazard ("screen" order).

The AI has been very strong since the very beginning, although there was some margin left for improvement. The AI can now handle wisely the conduct of your artilery fire without slippering-up from time to time, like the M109 battery that was insisting to sprinkle friendly troups. So you can easily delegate all artillery missions to the Fire Support Coordination Center (FSCC), notably because it’s the only one who can fire on "empty" hexes that produce intense thermal signature (enemy tubes) or radio traffic (enemy HQ).
Within the field of aviation, helos has a better knowledge of attack-and-scout tactics. Some players have developped a specific doctrine of use : first destroy the enemy ADs, then make the helos follow a triangle path leading to their starting point, near their HQ, where they can replenish with fuel and ammunition.

The developers argue that the Player's Edition AI is best at scooting, managing standoff range and resupplying units. The players won’t see tanks avoiding contact with troop carriers anymore. We nevertheless have all grounds for taking it at face value. Personally, after some solo games, I noticed only one minor clumsiness made by AI : it tends to let my HQs hide in nearby woods or villages without trying to wipe them off from the map.

About my best friend

My best friend's name is Abd Allah, who lives near me. He is 26 years (old) and works in society. I like yours (his) morality.He is always jovial and has (a) good smile. (At this moment, our friendships is in effect for more than 8 years.) (ou plus correct: We have known each other for 8 years.) I met him for the first time in the beginning of the school year. After that momment, I found (him) sociable and modest. I remember how we walked together to school every day. We would discuss on many subjects (or: We would talk about many subjects) on(or: such as) science and education. However, we have characteristics that are different, and some that are the same. He is strict(serious) a little bit in certain situations but he can resolve the problems between the friends. I like him.