Abstract - Environmental Engineering TCC

Hey everyone!!! So, I've been studying to become an Environmental Engineer and that's the last semester at university. To conclude the graduation, I'm supposed to write a big project about a specific subject that I could choose. Well, I've chosen a type of wastewater treatment system. And now, I've just written my abstract and I need to insert an English abstract in the project too, so can anyone help me here? Take a look, give me any corrections / suggestions..? Here it goes:


"The current project it is about the scaling and deployment of a Wastewater Treatment System by Root Zone in a small rural property situated in General Carneiro – PR, South of Brazil. Its finality was to evaluate to the system's efficiency. Starting from the study of the system's operation, a construction project was developed and executed by a team of academics and all the operation was followed by the property owners. With the system running, periodic samples were collected in order to analyze a number of parameters that portray the efficiency of the system. The average removal results obtained were: 85.26% for BOD; 88.98% for COD; 68.75% for settleable solids; 56.08% for total suspended solids; 49.76% for fixed solids in suspension; 58.23% for volatile suspended solids and output pH 6.4. The presence of total and fecal coliforms in the treated effluent was identified. It is necessary to continue the work, through the development of a Monitoring Plan that analyzes the parameters more often so the sistem has more detailed results"

Thank you all!

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E-mail to a friend.

This is a homework from my Language school.
Please, I need someone to correct me. Thanks.

I have to answer to an e-mail from a friend.



Hi Peter,
Thank you for your e-mail. I have to thank you for your interest in my life in Edinburgh. You are a great friend. Now, I am going to tell how are things with me.
You are right when you say that Scotland is an interesting country to visit. It is a beautiful place where you can visit a variety of landscapes. It is very different from England, not only for their landscapes but also their people. Scottish people are more friendly than English people, also they love to meet people from other places, like Spanish people do.
On the other hand, I think they are very tough and a little rough, also their English seems a little strange and it is very difficult to me to understand them. So, I am a little disappointed because I thought I would understand people better. But I hope it will be better next week.
Next, I am going to tell you that the school is very good. Teachers are keen and dedicated and they study the appropriate learning styles for each student, therefore each one develops his or her skills.

That is all for now. I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.

 

I think you shouldn't use: I am going to tell you ... 

I didn't correct it because it is an issue of writing style. 

Good luck! :)

Hello! 

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