Any mistakes? When Stella walked into the house, she was astonished to see a suitcase in the hall. She first thought that before going to work she was in hurry and didn't realize she brought a suitcase in the hall but when she got closer to that suitcase she understood it wasn't hers."Who brought this suitcase here?" she thought, but suddenly the closing of a door was heard. Something was happening, someone was in stella's house, but who? She run outside and other noises were heard coming from the garage. She opened the garage and she saw him. It was a kid! Stella immediatly asked him what was he doing in her house, and the kid answered he was trying to find his grandparents'  house but he couldn't find it, so, when it started raining he entered stella's house to not get wet. Stella helped him find his grandparents' house and when they found it, she fell happy to have helped the kid. This is how a boring day can be transformed into a special one.

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Invented Story, Please correct it When Stella walked into the house, she was astonished to see a suitcase in the hall. She first thought that before going to work she was in hurry and didn't realize she brought a suitcase in the hall but when she got closer to that suitcase she understood it wasn't hers."Who brought this suitcase here?" she thought, but suddenly the closing of a door was heard. Something was happening, someone was in stella's house, but who? She run outside and other noises were heard coming from the garage. She opened the garage and she saw him. It was a kid! Stella immediatly asked him what was he doing in her house, and the kid answered he was trying to find his grandparents'  house but he couldn't find it, so, when it started raining he entered stella's house to not get wet. Stella helped him find his grandparents' house and when they found it, she fell happy to have helped the kid. This is how a boring day can be transformed into a special one.

Letter to Chris (English test,please help me)

Dear Chris,

i'm glad you're happy for my visit. I know I'm not staying long enough, but you know, the most important thing is that we can spend time together. I would love to go to the Science festival because I've never been to a festival before. I would prefer to participate at the animal communication talk, firstly because I've already studied the sun at school and I didn't like it very much, secondly because I would like to become a vet some day so this talk could be useful for the future. However, are there restaurants at the festival? It is important to know it just in case we get hungry. Currently I can't stay longer because school is not over yet, and I'll get in trouble if I don't go.

Can't wait to see you,

XXX,

Laura