How to put a view based on an experiment in a native way? If there is any mistake in the sentences below, please point out to me, thanks in advance. On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction. That is ok in width. For the subsequent manufacture, we will keep the dimension tolerance within control.

How to put a view based on an experiment in a native way How to put a view based on an experiment in a native way? if there is any mistake in the sentences below, please point out to me, thanks in advance. On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction. That is ok in width. For the subsequent manufacture, we will keep the dimension tolerance within control.

How to put a view based on an experiment in a native way How to put a view based on an experiment in a native way On the basis of the first sample, we note requirements for outside dimensions of the foldable paper box are demanding, the length of its pallet is 2mm shorter while that of its frame is 5mm longer, which result in both do not match, the frame cannot base on the pallet in length direction. That is ok in width. For the subsequent manufacture, we will keep the dimension tolerance within control.

in regard to “of which” a box, a dimension of which is 1000mm, is empty a box,dimensions of which are 1000*500*500, is empty Can I use "of which" instead of "whose" in these above sentenses.

in regard to “add to” add a wooden strip, 200*100*8mm, to the long side of this box I mean nailing the strip on the long side, whose dimensions are 1200*500*12mm. Can I use "add .. on" instead of "add.. to" in this context ?

In regard to correspond Scheme 2: adding a fitting, 800*600*8mm, to the center of each long side, the fitting has a hand hole corresponding to that of the long side. One per side. Can I use "correspond" to mean both holes are similar in size and shape ? Can I say add a fitting ON the center of each side? If there is other mistake in the above , please point out to me , thanks in advance.

Changes to these drawings Hello xxx, Please take attached two drawings for reference in order to quote respectively. Changes to these drawings 1. Using 8mm instead of 12.5mm 2. Adding fittings Scheme 1: adding 800*100*8mm to the top and bottom of long sides (a packing box), each fitting need to be chamfered ,corner-cutting, glued and screwed, each side has 4pcs. Scheme 2: adding 800*600*8mm to the center of each long side, the fitting has a hand hole corresponding to that of the long side. One per side