Hi, could you correct these sentences, please?
1) He tried to retell the story but his interpretation was too loose so no one took in ('got'/ 'understood' would sound more natural here) the message of the story.
2) Dwight tries to set Jim up all the time because he's <s>envy</s> jealous/ envious of Jim's promotion.
3) The clash was <s>temporary</s> temporarily ceased because the opponents decided to try <s>to settle the thing down</s> resolving the issue in a peaceful way.
4) <s>It</s> They weren't the most enjoyable days <s>in</s> of my life but <s>I got</s> it was priceless experience.
5) Father asked me to make a fire while he's assembling the tent .
6) The teacher tried to steer the students <s>on</s> in the right <s>way</s> direction but all his efforts were hopeless (hopeless works but it is more common to hear 'all his efforts were in vain').