Come Back at Work

Last Monday I came back at work after 40 days of holidays.
It was a very awful day because it rained all day and someone scratched my car.
I'm a teacher and that day, while I was examine my students, a daft had gone to the private parking of the school and he (she?) had scratched my car and than he took the wheel rim of the left forward wheel.
Next week I'm going to go to my headmaster and ask him to buy e videocamera for monitor the parking.
I'm very sad, not for my car, but for the whole situation.

Come Back to Work

I came back to work last Monday after 40 days of vacation.

Recommendation for my friend on LinkedIn

Ilona is hard-working person, who is passionate about HR. She really cares about the company and is putting huge effort on making it growth (Hmm I don’t know if it is well put… I wanted to say that she does a lot, in order that her company stays at top of the competition, do you know, how to put it well. Despite her many responsibilities she had time to introduce me to HR World and shared the best practices, which I follow and are valuable for me.

Ilona is hard-working person,  --> Ilona is "a" hardworking person. 

September 8

I'm on the light rail. In front of me sit a boy and a girl in her school uniform. They look like lovers. But in China this kind of PUPPY LOVE(is this word right? love between middle school students) is not allowed by parents and teachers. Because it is considered an obstacle to their study. Besides, they are not mature enough to shoulder any responsibility for their love.

-- In front of me sits a boy and a girl who are wearing their school uniform.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English ,because I want to study abroad

Correction:

I am learning English, because I want to study abroad. 

*Just some adjustments on the punctuations.