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Hey, I'm Cecilia, and live in Shanghai now. I come to here for looking for a suitable language partner. If someone who is a English speaker wants to study Chinese, please contact with me. Hope we can help each other . ^_^
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    Introducing myself hey,everyone, im cecilia. i come to here in order to improve my english, very seriously, haha. i tend to improve my speaking and listening skill (it is not good), and of course i hope someone can correct my writing here. i just graduated this summer, i worked in business development company as a project assistant before i graduated , and they main invests in the business real estate. it is a good job people think , but for myself , i dont have lots of feel about it. so i quit it and i was looking for the second job. when i were in university, i was going to go to abroad for master degree to study wine business or management( but this plan was broken ) although my major is tax administration,haha. So i was thinking why not i work in this field now. then i focused on finding this job about wine. now, im very lucky , i finally work in a french company as a salesmen assistant. this job is a regular job, but i think it depend on myself, i can get lots thing from company system and study loads of wine knowledge from there people and internet. at the same time, there people are very nice to me, sometimes they let me to taste some good wines ,and give opportunity to get more practice. and then i will note these , and search more information about wine i tasted , which makes me more easy to get them.
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    一个照顾者

    周未总是好无聊。因为我的两个儿子都是残疾人, 所以我不能一个人把他们一起出去玩。我们不得不在家整个周未。爸爸妈妈不愿意在周围帮助我,而且因为我是照顾者,所以我没朋友,没有社交生活。当一个照顾者真是一个寂寞的生活,我们照顾者经常孤立地活着,有的时候这让我们发疯。这是我的生活,一个人工作,一个人照顾孩子,一个人学习,一个人吃饭,一个人睡觉,我一个人做一切。一个人,一个人,一个人,我讨厌当一个人。我只是希望有一天我能跟某人做一些事。

    朋友们,如果你知道一个照顾者,别忘记他们,请你有的时候去看他们,跟他们聊天一会儿,让他们坐下,为他们泡一杯茶(不要让他们为你泡),也许提出帮助他们把残疾人出去玩,我知道他们会很感谢。

    照顾者不是故意寂寞的,我们仅仅没有选择。

     

    周末总是好无聊,由于我的两个儿子是残疾人,我不能一个人带他们出去玩。我们不得不整个周末都在家,爸爸妈妈也不愿意帮助我。因为我是一个照顾者,我没有时间交朋友,更没有社交生活。作为一个照顾者,生活很寂寞,我们总是孤单的活着,有时候这会让我们发疯,可是这是我的生活,一个人工作,一个人照顾孩子,一个人学习,一个人吃饭,一个人睡觉,我总是一个人做这一切。一个人,一个人,我讨厌一个人。我真的希望某一天可以跟别人一起做一些事。

     

    朋友们,如果你认识一个照顾者,请别忘记他们,有时间就去看看他们,跟他们聊聊天,为他们泡杯茶(要不让他们为你泡),甚至也可以帮助他们带残疾人一起出去玩,他们一定会很感谢你的。

     

    照顾者不是故意保持沉默,我们只是没有选择。

     

    some advice:

    1)sometimes you use the first person, sometimes you use the third person, i think you should sure your writing's person.

    2) chinese writing is not too serious compared with english writing, sometimes we can omit some conjunctions, but sometimes if you can use a suitable conjunctions in your sentence, it will be awesome. dont worry,, it needs to more practice,and you can find the sense of grammar.

    3)please mind 周末 zhoumo, but you typed 周未 zhouwei。

     

     

     

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    August 23, 2014
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